Reviews for Lightning Bug
cshen.julienne chapter 1 . 8/8
hahahah
SongNoFound chapter 1 . 3/21/2019
cute !
SweetWritingIsMyLife chapter 1 . 12/3/2018
Very well written! I loved this story!
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 11/29/2018
This was a fun story. Well done.
drainednerves chapter 1 . 11/17/2018
Really, a very sweet story!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2018
Love it!
Karmitara chapter 1 . 11/2/2018
As someone who was struck by lightning, I can say you got the pain down pretty good. Great story! I loved every bit of it!
Elliot Ray chapter 1 . 11/1/2018
I love this! Update!
EmilyF.6 chapter 1 . 10/31/2018
This was sooo good! I loved the interactions between the three and especially how well you wrote Tony
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2018
Hey this was great! I love the dynamic between these 3 and the way u honoured it
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 1 . 10/31/2018
Considering Peter's lack of self preservation, perhaps Tony can see about insulating the suit somehow.
cargumentluv chapter 1 . 10/30/2018
Loved it!
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 10/30/2018
Dear Strider:

Yes, you'd better turn this into an actual story. Because this is a superhero universe, you know - which means that anyone getting hit by lightning, and just *recovering*, with no long-term effects in the form of abnormal power alterations, is strictly against the rules. (Particularly when you've provided Peter with a corresponding cheesy name in the very title of the story…)

Sincerely,
Qoheleth

P.S.: Oh, and also, just as an aside: The suit is called a "Mark 64". Mach 64 would be… oh, about 49,000 miles per hour.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2018
Oh my gosh yes! Please turn this into a story this was amazing! I love your use of descriptive words, and especially how you described Tony and Peter. It was perfect!