Reviews for Lightning Bug |
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cshen.julienne chapter 1 . 8/8 hahahah |
SongNoFound chapter 1 . 3/21/2019 cute ! |
SweetWritingIsMyLife chapter 1 . 12/3/2018 Very well written! I loved this story! |
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 11/29/2018 This was a fun story. Well done. |
drainednerves chapter 1 . 11/17/2018 Really, a very sweet story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2018 Love it! |
Karmitara chapter 1 . 11/2/2018 As someone who was struck by lightning, I can say you got the pain down pretty good. Great story! I loved every bit of it! |
Elliot Ray chapter 1 . 11/1/2018 I love this! Update! |
EmilyF.6 chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 This was sooo good! I loved the interactions between the three and especially how well you wrote Tony |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 Hey this was great! I love the dynamic between these 3 and the way u honoured it |
Melancholy's Sunshine chapter 1 . 10/31/2018 Considering Peter's lack of self preservation, perhaps Tony can see about insulating the suit somehow. |
cargumentluv chapter 1 . 10/30/2018 Loved it! |
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 10/30/2018 Dear Strider: Yes, you'd better turn this into an actual story. Because this is a superhero universe, you know - which means that anyone getting hit by lightning, and just *recovering*, with no long-term effects in the form of abnormal power alterations, is strictly against the rules. (Particularly when you've provided Peter with a corresponding cheesy name in the very title of the story…) Sincerely, Qoheleth P.S.: Oh, and also, just as an aside: The suit is called a "Mark 64". Mach 64 would be… oh, about 49,000 miles per hour. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2018 Oh my gosh yes! Please turn this into a story this was amazing! I love your use of descriptive words, and especially how you described Tony and Peter. It was perfect! |