continue please

can't wait for the next chapter in this story

I'll tell you what I think... I think you should tucking hurry up and give me more

updated please

Nice story.

Well nice little return for the team, although wondering if you plan to have Kakashi actually learn more about Naruto, and have a better understanding on how badly his sensei messed up. In some ways, it would be amazing if his next conversation with the family don't include him asking what would they have done if they learned about Naruto's abilities earlier, even at the risk of being called hypocrites.

In some ways, it would be nice to see how the family starts to fall apart when the parents don't bother trying to own up to anything, while the siblings become even more divided once they have an eye-opening experience when the lies comes out.

so far is quite interesting and good. an amazing work for the first work. just don't turn menma in the final evil boss. have seen it several times already and haven't found it particularly interesting

Interesting.

Looking forward to what happens next.

Though, I'm curious if Naruto will forgive Yayoi before anyone in his family?

Great story.

I wouldn't worry too much about the mistakes, as nobody is perfect, and you stated a true statement: you have to learn to crawl before you learn to walk so to speak.

I am curious if you were inspired by Yayoi Ulshade from Kyoryurangers, as that's the only other Yayoi I can think of.

Kudos for using lions as a summoning contract.

I hope you use his lion summons more often their cool. I wish some of his family was given another chance to be a family.

updated soon please

Yo, I just found this story and I can't wait to read more of this, I normally don't comment since I don't know what to say but oh boy is this story good

Glad to see you're back! I had to reread the previous chapters as I had forgotten everything, but it was worth it. Curious how Naruto will react to kakashi, though I don't suspect it will be too favorable given their respective relationships to minato. Looking forward to reading more!

Great story, i can't to read more, please update soon

Please sir can I have some more