Reviews for Monstrous Delinquent
HeavenSpire12 chapter 2 . 8/24
This chapter was hilarious, especially when beat the shit out of the offs and his moments with Ms. Smith.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/4
Please update Naruto Loud. Pretty Please.
NatsuKurogane99 chapter 2 . 7/28
Oh Muy god for One momentos Naruto will be Stepson From Yujiro Hanma bit with a rage for a Figth,we are waiting more moments .

And One thing more Naruto will meet Sagiri Ameno(Yuragi-sōu No Yūna-san) a friend of Chisaki.
Imperious115 chapter 2 . 7/20
I don't know if this story is dead i hope its not but if its not take your time because this has some good potential
Axccel chapter 2 . 7/8
I like that you didn't leave his background of saving people as just a footnote. You actually brought one or more of them into the story.

And I'm loving his personality.
Axccel chapter 1 . 7/8
This is a great start, I hope you pick it up again! Sure, it has problems, but they're minor and easy to ignore.

That said, about your author's note. It's not a good policy to lash out at your fans to "get back" at spammers who don't give a damn about your stories. Sure, you're not verbally lashing out at your fans, but you are attempting to punish the spammers (who couldn't care less about your stories) by punishing your fans (who actually want to read your stories). That's dumb, at best the trolls will think it's hilarious. You cannot blame the spammers for it; you chose to do it. Nobody held a gun to your head and made you, you chose to. Nobody forced you to waste time on spam reviews either, you chose to. Don't blame other people for your choices and don't put the consequences of those choices on people who had nothing to do with it.
The Quincy god chapter 2 . 5/30
hey I heard that in Japan the age age of consent is 13
Guest chapter 2 . 5/14
Hop for more soon
Wolf chapter 2 . 5/10
This is hilarious please continue
Guest chapter 2 . 5/10
aw... was hoping for Cerea to be with Naruto since he's actually strong and he could've accidentally seduced Cereas mom later in the arc.
Yushin1831 chapter 2 . 5/10
Oi bastard, whats taking so goddamn long! where are the fucking chapters man, do yoi really want me to pay for it!? arghhhhhhhhhhh, I need 50k chapters next time or I wont be able to sleep properly!
Yushin1831 chapter 1 . 5/10
You bloddy bastard! where is the other infinite chapters! I-we want them now! update this glorious fic or else Ill fucking pay for it!
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 5/1
Naruto, I heard what happened early and I want to ask you something." Smith said, "Was it like that for other twenty-two times?"

How'd she find out it was 23 times?
Guest chapter 2 . 4/17
Still looking forward to the next chapter
PLEASE READ chapter 2 . 4/3
I really enjoy this story I hope to see it end and I like where you were going with it my only suggestion is to maybe add two more of the Minotaur to naruto’s group like the meek one with the down facing horns and the largest chest and the one that is the leader because I think their personalities would be a good matchI forget their names right now
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