Your writung is improving. You really see the difference between chapter 1 and now. Please continue

Hey, how is it going? Did you have a good holiday?

I am curious see what happens next. There is very little known about Festivia’s husband, so I would love to see your ideas for him, now her.

There is nothing wrong with your writing. Your story is unique among the others and I would be very sad if you quit.

I mean Mushy my apologies.

Festivia husbands name was Musty.

Nice, I really like the way you portray him. Although I think later in life he will have problems with the fact that Shastica and his supposed father’s leaving him alone with her. The only tip I have for you i to slow down the chapters a bit and concentrate more on details. For example I would have liked to read a bit more about his land Shatica’s relationship. Although maybe you plan to adres this later. But for the rest this is perfect! Don’t worry you are a great writer.

Festivio looks like someone not too bad but if you say he is hedonistic then I don't know what to expect from him.
Hedonists are usually selfish like hell.

What a bastard is Shasticas father. Calling Eclipsine weird and scary looking. Do you know what is scary? You’re ugly toad daughter naked!

I can’t believe that Mina and the other monsters died. How did they find them? Abd is Shastica still alive?! Guess I have to wait to find out.

Oh my poor heart. I felt so bad for Eclispine, Globgal, Meteoro and most of all Alphys. That poor woman will outlive them and never get to see them of her grandchild again. It break my heart to think Meteoro will go through hell and she doesn’t know nor can she do anything about it.

What do you mean by no regrets? You didn't change the will! Oh well, killing an unkillable Monster was phenomenal though.

And I think that was a Hero Aca reference?

At least he's going to change his will. That's a good thing, but um, not if he doesn't he come back.

And yeah, little Prince is certainly afraid of others finding out about his interests.

Well, he at least managed to save his son from an assassin bat, so horray for that!

Eclipsine should really be more careful though. Troubling times he lives in.

This is it. I love how Solarius was given the phrase of Monster Carver. And gives the prince actual reason to go to war against the Monsters because this was a very serious retaliation.