Reviews for The Kiss Of A Spirit
JustSomeoneElse chapter 17 . 9/9
Another great chapter! Manny’s got it baaad, haha.
JustSomeoneElse chapter 16 . 8/11
Poor Frida, things are just gonna get rougher from now on, aren't they? At least she has Manny and her other friends by her side. Also, I figured Django was gonna be one of the main villains but Che's appearence surprised me.
JustSomeoneElse chapter 15 . 8/11
I think I've said this before, but I really do like how many different creatures you incorporate in this fic in place of the youkai from the anime. Great chapter as usual!
JustSomeoneElse chapter 12 . 8/11
It's been a while since I've seen the anime, but I do vaguely remember this mini-arc. Wonderful job on the chapters- I'm gald Frida's slowly maturing and growing into the powerful lady she is meant to be.
thekingisback2 chapter 14 . 7/25
glad i waited this long to read this chapter
thekingisback2 chapter 12 . 7/14
solid 8 out 10 good work cant wait to read more
Guest chapter 10 . 7/10
This was a good chapter. Its nice to see an update.
JustSomeoneElse chapter 9 . 7/5
It’s been a while but this is a nice chapter. Hopefully Manny realizes his feelings sooner than later.
JustSomeoneElse chapter 8 . 8/20/2019
Great chapters as usual! I really like the adaptations you're making so they can fit better with the El Tigre cast, the myths and creatures are all pretty interesting! Also, I really liked Xibalba's appearence in the story, as well as La Muerte's.
Shaeril McBrown chapter 8 . 8/16/2019
Wait Frida looked like Christina
Dreamer Red Streak chapter 2 . 2/17/2019
I would just like to say, i deeply apologize for not reviewing much, my only sad excuse s that my memory is absolutely dreadful. I'm also really bad at reviewing; as long as the plot makes sense, there's nothing rude to the readers, and does what the creator intended, then it's a well done story. You certainly wright well, and you seem to no exactly the story you want to tell, so I say you are doing perfect so far. :D Keep doing what you enjoy X3
Dreamer Red Streak chapter 1 . 11/28/2018
Well it's certainly very interesting, a little bit fast so far, but definitely enjoyable. :)
JustSomeoneElse chapter 5 . 11/12/2018
So far this is pretty good. I figured Zoe would be the south spirit. And I really, really like the little adaptations and changes you made so the story can fit better with the mythology. Overall, this is turning out to be a pretty good story.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/24/2018
This is pretty enjoyable. You did say there would be comedy but I wasn't expecting to laugh
JustSomeoneElse chapter 2 . 10/25/2018
The story’s good so far and I think your writing has improved quite a bit- the descriptions are longer but the narrative flows nicely. I also recognize the anime you based this on (nice choice, by the way) and I like how you adapted it so it fits with Mayan/Aztec mythology instead. I’m curious as to which creatures will appear and which characters are you going to choose to fill the other roles. Good job.
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