Reviews for Twilight Reversed
debb lavoie chapter 7 . 3/28/2019
Great chapter!
Debbie H chapter 7 . 3/28/2019
8. Chased
te necklace was cursed shatterd ws glowing reaveled my trues form teeth twin caines wre powerful bitten best friends with mixed of bothg then suddenly praying to Selenity to grant us neormal eyes andd skin were infacted with Letya poison then reveal to other best friends with Bre and Diego the guaed found us wre with normal skin and eyes like in Tru-blood you die then Cruelly executed by them yiu there bring them then Scramimg them pleading good MAULEDBY LEMATYAS But a sehkllat was rtipped to death with the m good assaullted mire then then Bleeding to death the then the venom ewsas coursing blood from our eyes pleading merciful words you lie Murdered us/they we Fled get her then too late got you yiu are punished from here chained screamig verdict death for murr of the both Beaten the seer head my screams was head with tore clothes and blood still flowing CARLISLE BELLA'S SEXUaLLY ASSAULTED! Dire then then with us/them then lost from here bl;ew up then then too late the newspapers of my death with theirs good brought them was with Edwaerd's transplanted with theirs sicker was dying who did to her Volturi come it's them had kids Killed by Them but nulled lost from here Nothingness then brought there then good with them then lost the need to breed no cycle left gasp bitten were eight kids with both nuked were others smashed with oues with theirs blown freely then was without seed anymore healed by the kids's bite was venomous to save to heal me then lost the color od the skins then Chained guilty of freaks the the mother will be destroyed wit bthem Executed with them but tore from me Humanity stolen from us/they blew up good brought there then the change sped up again Alice they ae going to be vengeful are be Vampires smashed with us/them blew apart then lost from here then in time was unable to reproduce then woke from the change frozen as a teenager so they gasp Volturi done this act you are Vampires then too late First hunt with them to more Who turned you the then Felix take care of Isabella with them Cruelliest killed then Destroyed then then brought there good guard they cannot be humans these then good then now parnemently immortal Alice they destroyed us/they with them too late were as all of them never aged but had stopped changing cursed us to live forever Smashed freely painfully then from home as all of clothes to both to our NASA Bodysuits sliced freely now with golden eyes we in fact undead trapped as teenagers blew apart then brought both from here good guard they all converted were poisoned then Atomized by vaporizing it was too late but more as all of guards that never were humans from rest remains as all of good train them find them mates ten it was over it was gone forever four nuked were as all of them very far as all of them Alice she has no kids they were with kids Volturi of the kids they killed sixth with your creator murdere then Smashed freely good they are punished ythen nnuked freely blew up brought there punished us/they blown from here Then merged blw up then brought there good guard they can't see them then Skinned them alivve now in a Motorhome fused Alice they done to us/them gasp they caused her/they to have powers immortally undead with the great-grandchildren forever nuked freely then blown up then brought there good guard they are alive in Cailfornia blown up good bring them then Vaporizing it was too late now trapped as teenagers witnessed Earth change in time stopped death from here Bree began to speak: Though to be wary I Will should be venture in someplace scary I Turn LOOSE! GHOSTING HAUNTS! BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE! IT'S SHOWTIME! a verry thoundrous cracking noise miss me say the word 3 times then herself screamed out: Beetlejuice BEETLEJUICE BEETLEJUICE! Then gone blown good bring the criminals then lost from here that too late killed Alice what is that stench Bree you are gifted gasp they murdered us/they ugh pus tree Sir! Neitherworld what?! Daddy with both then too late with things from home now the parents/siblings both with three were into Volterra then killed with tribe murdered joined us/they lost from here now gone they used homes.
DxGRAYxMAN chapter 6 . 3/27/2019
As a Yorkshire man myself i can 100% say I do not say love. I'm looking forward to more, love:)
debb lavoie chapter 6 . 3/27/2019
I love the book store scene, well done!
debb lavoie chapter 5 . 3/25/2019
Ahhhh, Edward, how interesting to see him mirrored , liking this.
debb lavoie chapter 4 . 3/24/2019
So interesting seeing the flip side of the story. Great chapter!
debb lavoie chapter 3 . 3/16/2019
Interesting description of how the hug felt.
DxGRAYxMAN chapter 3 . 3/16/2019
:) well this is new I'm looking forward to more
debb lavoie chapter 1 . 3/16/2019
Like reading a mirrored version of Twilight. I'm going to enjoy this story.
debb lavoie chapter 2 . 2/12/2019
Really enjoyed this twist on the original.