Good

ADORABLE

its good all you need do is tweak some grammer and i would love to see a smut Colin being dom and Tony being bottom tho this prob isn't gonna be seen ó~ò

uh yes

The only thing I would suggest is to uh, not explain everything, like for example, “...my cheeks would turn to a light blue blush (Cuz I draw Tony’s blush color blue)”
And some grammar fixes.
Really cute, though!

...Okay ya lost me at Colin the electrical device getting water..

This is so cute and funny! I like the writing style. Good stuff mate

hit the woah

boi if u dont