Enjoying the rewrite more than the original. Fingers crossed you remove all the time travel nonsense. And maybe pick up the pacing a bit.

I'm kind of on the fence about this. It's got a great premise, but that school should've had cameras right? You also don't seem to understand Bakugo's power. He sweats nitroglycerin that he can detonate. There is no super heating aspect to it that would cause the air around his hands to distort.

Also, you have way too many OC's for this early in the story. IMO.

Lastly, maybe Izuku was being a jerk but Tsuyu was being worse. I mean,wow, where does she get off. She knows nothing about him and things she had the right to play councillor. His comment about her smile made no sense in that situation.

Lastly, you Izuku came off as nearly suicidal in this last chapter. You were pouring on the drama a bit hard.

so good more please!

A very promising start to the new version of the story. Really hope you keep it up; it’s been great so far.

Gonna be real, while I liked the old version of this story, it DID feel fairly weak (the whole "Time Travel" thing kinda stuck in my craw, especially since the impact of that was immediately invalidated with "they didn't do this before"). For a first story it was quite good.

THIS however, is much more polished and a MUCH more enjoyable read. I can't wait to see how this goes.

And at last, Izuku finally meets Tsuyu. The meeting was interesting and enjoyable, but I felt that, even if Tsuyu is kind of blunt, here she was way blunter than usual, and took way too many liberties with a total stranger. Let's hope we get to see Tsuyu again in the next chapter.

Glad youre back, hope everything is goin right, i really like the developement in Midoriya character, nice chapter

Personally, I'd recommending dialing the 'bitch' setting down a few notches on... pretty much everyone in this fanfic. Everyone's personality is WAAA-A-A-A-Y over the top to the point that they come across more as caricatures than characters. It's almost bewildering.

Other than that, it's hard to go wrong with a solid premise, which you have.

I'm gonna guess the next chapter consists of Izuku getting ragdolled, yet finding the strength to keep going, and impressing the leader with his indomitable will. She'll probably tell him in no particular way that he's accepted and to show up early and should he waste her time by not improving that he's finished and should he show his face at their gym after failing, she'll kill him.

Oh Deku my boi, you are gonna have your ass whooped :p Old Nana is such a savage :D
I get that live can be busy so don't worry too much about that :) I just hope that you will continue to update even if it takes month or more, this is really good story. Good luck!

Man, the premise is still similar, but the whole meeting kylie and the gym chapter is so different! I was confused after reading the first version of this story that you felt you had to redo it, considering the fact that it was amazing! But this, man you've improved in leaps and bounds, keep going man!

Could be better, much better. Was actually very boring and Izuku's personality is unoriginal and his pu$$y attitude is very annoying.

Well this is a completely new introduction. I love it already.

I liked the chapter!

I am actually quite pissed that you decided to rewrite a perfectly good story