Reviews for Helpless
HalfaGhostGirl13 chapter 6 . 7/12
I love the trope of 'figuring it out but not actually' you have for most of these docs, and using Star was a great way of making an authentic revelation fic! Since we hardly can tell knowing Danny's secret from the POV of some average teenager that has no want to actively go after ghosts, it's great.
Giraffacorn chapter 6 . 3/30
This is so good! I wish Star had more actual character in the show, and so I absolutely love when she gets whole stories! This was an absolutely fantastic read! You're an amazing writer!
Luna Lillyth chapter 6 . 3/21
This was more fun to read than what I was expecting.
I don’t read stories with the DP side characters much, so this was a new experience. I like your take on Star.
xTorchbearerx chapter 6 . 3/21
Great story from Star's perspective! I really like that she still supports Danny, even though she's in disbelief of what she knows. The little detail of her realizing Valerie's secret as well and her thought process of trying to slowly convince her that Phantom isn't evil makes me like this Star all the more! She's proven to be both kind and clever.
Jerichoyuy chapter 6 . 3/20
Nice I was surprised to see an update. A damn good one too. Had to read it again a bit to get my memory of it back up lol are you planing to continue?
Dp-Marvel94 chapter 6 . 3/19
Great update! So Star figured out about Valerie being the Red Huntress now. I liked seeing a bit of the relationship between those two.
Az The Dragon chapter 6 . 3/19
This is a good bonus.
I liked the fact that in the end Star realized that Valerie was the Red Huntress, or that it was a bad idea to invite her other three friends. I mean, Kwan could end up listening if Dash wasn't there to influence his action towards Danny, but Dash himself and Paulina? They just don't have any regards towards Danny.
It's a good thing Star realized that.
Chaos-Wolfy chapter 6 . 3/19
Eeeey! It updated! I thought this fic was abandoned! Glad to be proven wrong and it's nice that Star is so determined to help!
Invader Johnny chapter 6 . 3/19
Star was really trying to help and that shows that despite her unorthodox ways that she really does want the best for Danny, that's a good friend right there.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.
Zamara27 chapter 5 . 1/18
I haven't seen many good stories out there that paint Star like this. I love how you developed her, how she questioned everything she saw after she was given hints, and reached almostcorrect conclusions. It's one of the best Star-centric pieces I've read!
Nightwing15 chapter 5 . 6/29/2019
This is such an amazing story! Thank you for writing it! Reading from Star's POV was definitely different, but a good different!
pingo1387 chapter 5 . 1/21/2019
Loved this story! Loved the interactions between Star and Danny (and everyone else), and how her own curiosity led her to get involved in everything. Great work!
pingo1387 chapter 4 . 1/21/2019
That was a clever move on Star's part! Though she may have gotten more than she bargained for...
pingo1387 chapter 3 . 1/21/2019
Great chapter! Love Star's thought process and the ending - did she notice the halfa remark?
pingo1387 chapter 2 . 12/16/2018
Looking forward to see where this goes... wonder how long Danny can keep this up?
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