HOT!

Finally! A Fiancéeshipping lemon story where Jaden is in-character and doesn't come across as a cheap porn scene like about 95% of the other more recent ones on here. You made it sensual and romantic, not just sexual, and that is what more authors should be trying to do imo. The only slight criticism I have here is that you stated that they went on for hours. Since it was both their first time, that isn't very realistic. Actually, it can be pretty hard to go that long when it isn't the first time, too. But since this is an anime, maybe that isn't that important anyways. The story before was also good. I loled at the guys trying to cover for Jaden by telling Alexis he was sick. And the proposal through the duel was a cute idea. Overall, nice work!

We need a honeymoon sequel!

I was wondering if you could do a male duelist x lyrilusc assembeld nightingale x lunalight cat dancer?

That was really good. Keep up the good work. Jaden and Alexis forever.

nice job. a couple duel notes though. the contact fusers return the materials to the deck, so Miracle Fusion wouldn't work. you'd have to use Miracle Contact. also, De-Fusion summons the materials from the graveyard and Miracle Fusion removes the materials from play, so you wouldn't get the monsters back. and same with Fusion Gate. it removes the materials from play so De-Fusion wouldn't bring them back. Spark Blaster only has three shots, and then destroyed. so Alexis's card couldn't destroy it because it was supposed to be gone already.

Pity that Jaden and Alexis didn't get together as boyfriend/girlfriend in the show since I thought that they were perfect together. And is this the only chapter your doing for this, or will there be more chapters in the future?