Reviews for Orange and Gaming Gals: the Ninja and the Princess |
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Mpower0438 chapter 1 . 6/29/2019 If you do write another one of these stories my vote is for Chun li. |
Phoenixlord42 chapter 1 . 5/18/2019 I would love to see the other women that join them |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/29/2019 good chapter. |
CrimsonRasengan chapter 1 . 3/25/2019 catspats31 go fuck yourself guideline enforcer |
Autismguy593 chapter 1 . 2/28/2019 Good one-shot. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/12/2018 Try a fanfic with naruto paired with Rem Galleu and Shera L. Greenwood from an anime/manga called “How not to summon a demon lord” |
JC chapter 1 . 11/5/2018 Great,any chance you do Naruto and female Shepard from Mass effect? |
SirMaou chapter 1 . 10/28/2018 stop with the guidelines just read if you want to read if not then don't read the dudes work |
LordofTerror chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 catspats31 you're probably that person who just has to be the white knight if you really think FFN actually enforces their guidlines then you're barking up tbe wrong tree so quit hitching and go read your stories and leave author's alone. |
catspats31 chapter 1 . 10/14/2018 While the writing quality of your story is good, please note this part of the Content Guidelines: "Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference." Please remove all detailed descriptions of the physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in the story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is permitted such as Archive Of Our Own or AdultFanfiction. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 The use of clones totally ruined this. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 My advice is when someone else is talking space it cause it kind of takes me out of the story and it’s hard to read. For example if Naruto was talking it would go “Blah blah” Naruto said “Blah blah” princess peach said That’s how you do it and trust me it will really helps |
pitbull4567 chapter 1 . 10/11/2018 Great story |
nero99 chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 Great story here! Happy birthday Naruto Uzumaki Namikaze |
kamikage86 chapter 1 . 10/10/2018 I love Naruto with girls from other series, keep it going. |