Nice little story, warm and fuzzy.

Mhh, I can see how this would be redacted but I don't think this would even be included in military service records.
I can understand why and how but I really can't believe it.
This was over all a great story anyways. You write the characters always in a way I can see them acting.
So thank you for sharing.

Well that was a solid chapter but I am confused:
Elizabeth Weir is one person I am convinced has read all her personels files and if what Jack said on Earth is true... she would've know about the familial relationship between Daniel and John( just my two cents *sorry*)

Hey
So yes I am still around even if I am late to the party ... should've put you on author alert *hangs head in shame*
Loved this start and you really got what I loved about Carson and Rodney.
Really good characterization.

Just came across this story. Very interesting idea. I can see a young John acting out that way, especially after loosing his mother and his father no doubt not handling both that and being a single parent well among other things. Would be interesting if Dave and Daniel were to meet, especially since they have basically the opposite of a relationship with John.

Interesting that Sam is not in this at all. I'm assuming she'd be told about this before her posting to Atlantis, right? I always thought that it was a shame that the only member of SG-1 to visit Atlantis during her time there was Teal'c and that was only at her request to help Ronon (and it was a brief visit at that).

Awe so nice I really enjoyed it.

I like how you got the reveal out. You are so talented! I wish I could write, You make it look so easy. I write a letter to my family and all I get out is " Hi. How are you? I'm fine" Than I'm lost for words LOL.

I love this story! Thanks for the flashback! Looking forward to the next part.

Nice chapter! I love the dynamics between the characters.

Enjoyed this very much - for the Pegasus mission and how you built a way for the situation to happen, but especially for the relationship between John and Daniel, and John and Ronon, and Daniel and Jack (and Cam; loved the "big puppy" comments)! It all fit together beautifully, and the characters rang true. I can definitely see John having run away as a kid, and refusing to share anything that would send him back.

I love John's sense of humor in this chapter. I don't know about you but I always thought that they should have put John & Teyla together in the show. They had such good chemistry.

I am dying to know what happened when they were younger. I am really enjoying this story. I only have the first seven season's of SG-1 but have all five of SGA. Sometimes I like to listen to the commentary. I love the sound of Joe's voice.

This is a good story. I am enjoying it. Thank you again for keeping STARGATE ALIVE! I miss them so much. I never even tried SGU, Only because it took SGA away from us.

Love the backstory for John and Daniel. You totally nailed the characters their personalities, and relationships. Ronan protecting John as a brother is perfect.

Nice moment between John and Daniel.