There a word I presumed is missing from the ending monologue but other I like this ending more then the other one.

So fetch is the beast now? That’s very interesting. I never thought the girl with purple lights can take over the world. If the story ended here pretty fine. Don’t know what happened to Troy or Ryan but that’s a little nitpick. Thanks for the story, man

Great way to end the 3rd act, I wonder what will happen next?

OH CRAP! 3 main characters die in the same chapter? That’s insane.

So the death of Delsin will kick off the war, that's an incredible plot device. I don't think any other infamous fanfic on the site has done that, great job.

So based on the last note, there is probably one more story to go at least. I wonder what will happen.

Well, so much for keeping the peace.

The Christian Nerd

You aren't the first to mention that. I too believe that my chapters are too short. I'm working on fixing that currently, but its an issue with time management. I'm terrible at planning and finding time to just sit down and write. I would like to make all my chapters about the same length as in Chapter 13, but it's been difficult. Some chapters are purposefully short however to help transition better. That being said, I've proven that I can write a solid chapter with a good length well within the timeframe. Hopefully that can translate to future works.

Also, if you, or anyone else for that matter, would like help in writing or planning a story, I would be more than willing to provide any thougts or suggestions. Just PM me and we can get started.

I gotta say Falkreath, you’re writing style is very engaging and easy to follow. I can’t wait to see the end of this story and whatever follows. The only thing I can really say is that the chapters are a bit too short, but otherwise it’s very well done!

I am also planning to write an InFAMOUS story based on a sequel idea, but I’m having a hard time trying to think of a compelling way to write it.

My god, it’s getting real!

The Crystal Brick

You are absolutely right. The only person you should strive to please is yourself. That being said, if someone doesn't like your writing and they give a reason why, that's extremely valuable, especially as a creator. If someone nags on your writing and doesn't give a valid argument to support it, than the best thing you can do is ignore them.

I just want to know what others are interested in. I have several ideas for stories and I was curious to see which story you guys would like to see next. I have a poll on my profile page with a list of stories that I'm considering. If you have the time, I would appreciate you guys stopping by and voting in that poll.

In my opinion, Ciaus Falkreath. You should do whatever pleases you. Follow your heart. That's what I've been doing. If someone tells you to stop doing your fanfic or saying that your work is trash, ignore them. They only have power over you if you let them.

I hope you have fun time making stories, they are clearly your passion and I respect that very much. Good luck with college and everything.

That's very nice of you to say brooklynusaman1997. As for your question, I have just the very basic premise of another infamous story in mind. However, I would like to work on something else before I work on that. I love writing inFamous and this trilogy has been a blast for me. But it's not what everybody wants. Also, a big shoutout to everybody who participates in the reviews section of my stories. That's very appreciated. If you have any questions, feel free to ask them here or via PM. I don't usually respond to comments but I also don't usually kill off three characters in a single chapter either ;). Times change. However, if it's a question regarding the story itself, I probably won't answer it for the sake of spoilers. Anyways, I've been rambling on long enough, thank you brooklynusaman1997 for the question and special thanks to The Crystal Brick, rmarcano321, and the Christian Nerd who've been providing their comments, feedback, and theories since the beginning of this story.