My issue here is that you kept the police response to hosu the same. Endeavor had to he given credit in canon because the kids didnt have licenses NOR did their mentors give permission to use their quirks and fight. Here they did have authority so the argument doesn't work

Loving the story so far please update soon as for transferring it to A03 please dont

You could have him summon the holy moonlit greatsword and quickening from bloodborne or the sunlight spear from dark souls

I do have to admit that this was quite an eye opener and I cannot wait to see what changes you have for the training camp arc. I also enjoyed how you changed up the Exams for everyone...definitely unique.

To me, since her basically now has a mix of 3 variation of attacks and mixes them, I like it when he names them. Plus with how you describe them, it differentiates the attacks and such, giving them a sense of personality to em. So I'd like to see him name them out, just no screaming out "ONE FOR ALL:-"for all to hear. Hehe

Love your story and I can’t wait for more

Niiiiiiiiiiice story. I really love what you're doing here. keep going. and, honestly, I always think that izuku's outfit is the solar outfit that escanor has on the mobile game Nanatsu no Taizai Grand Cross

Really Really Fkin Deku really I'll just ignore it I expected the Sun and Moon Hero Avatar

Man their kids will be op like Solar Creation or Lunar Creation from their own bodies without need for sun or moon pshh fkin Escanor

I really don't like him being called Deku that's an insult he should be called Izu or Midori nor fkin Deku that shit pisses me off that he named himself that in canon

So, Ibara finds out about one for all before Momo? That doesn't make sense, they're putting her in unnecessary danger for no reason, while leaving a prime kidnapping target clueless. Momo learning the secret puts her in no danger because she's already in danger as the rich girlfriend of Izuku, so she really should have been told long before Ibara was.

Don’t name attacks.

I would say that it would be better to use the names of the attacks to help draw a better visual.

I have to admit that I was enjoying the fight and then you had the anti-climatic part of them being stopped by Amaterasu. I understand your reasoning behind it since Io is pretty much a goddess and whatnot, but still...

Anyways, I think that you should keep the attack names, especially since just saying "this attack happened" it would be quite cool to see what you could come up with. Plus...we know what Deku's moves are so far so Flaming Delaware Smash, for example, is a delaware smash just with heat/solar energy attached to it.

Also...the Don't suck part was cruel by Ammy-chan...

DASM

No no no m8. Take your time. I'd rather see quality chapters. Plus, AP exams ain't no joke.

AP US history and AP world history were painful.