i still dont understand saphieres semblance, but what i do know is that she is incredbly weak. Its almost like she has no aura you need to change that

This is how you make a rwby fanfiction, i like how this is one of the only "reborn as rwby" fanfictions that works. Keep up the good work

Rencarnation is like a different timeline but whit different even is you oc make the must ridiculous plan ever that make Cinder plan a total lost.

I total hope Phyra and Jaune will confess there fellings to each other.

love the fanfic

Quite nice chapter and fight, curious to see about how much volume 2 will change. Good work.

good chapter. good story. you just have to wait for new chapters. I hope I can handle this)
(there is an idea for some kind of story: 1 soul / mind 2 bodies. I want to read the story with this idea. do it if you have time and ideas) {thanks in advance if you start writing}

amazing chapter again if I'm able to favorite again ill favorite a million times. now on to what I said about jaune being a love interest. now it would be funny to see jaune realize he fell in love with saphire he'd be like "oh shit...I'm in love with her aren't I" or see saphire be like "SHIT HE FELL IN LOVE WITH ME!". Now if you are planning to save pyrrha then maybe consider making jaune gradually lose interest in becoming her boyfriend and more in becoming her close friend. now if you do kill pyrrha off then maybe you can consider making saphire comfort jaune then jaune blurts out his feeling to her? or just make saphire oblivious to jaune's feeling and make the rest of the cast try to help him gain her love for him which would be difficult considering saphire was a GUY but it would still be funny. then again it's your story so YOU choose what to do.

also maybe expanding on the idea of fossil fuel and oil would be a good development for the story maybe making that the next chapter? continuing on from this chapter of course maybe making blake confront saphire about it?

I'm just gonna say I love your story. also i think giving the oc a love interest would be an interesting development. jaune would be a good choice making him fall for the oc cause the oc has been helping him since day one so it would make sense for him to develop a sort of crush over the oc.

I reakly like this story is really amazing but I gonna tell you a advice a man reborn as a girl is like 50/50 odds to like boths gene or only one.

Hmm, WPS. I remember using that.

Love how this is going! Tale your time.

Interesting story. Can't wait to see where you take it.

Not too sure about the memory sifting therapist. It's a tad bit dark. But okay.

Also sorry if i missed so many updates.

Quite nice chapters and fight, can't wait for more.

Interesting.