I am loving this story!

he should know this

Hi there

Hifumi having a Persona would be nice one because of her strategic mind...

Ann and Ryuji do make a nice couple, but I think Morgana deserve some love, make him a human in this fic :-)

Anyway, keep up the great writing ans stay safe!

It was nice to have you as our lovely author for your time here Rain. I thank you for your services and hope we can one day see you on here again. Until then, hello Blues. I guess you'll be taking the reigns from now on? Well, I wish you the best of luck. I won't go out and say i expect your chapters to be exactly like Rain's. All I will say is do your best, and I look forward to what you can do.

Ooh Hifumi starts seeing and hearing her Shadow. Does this mean she'll awaken to her Persona and join the Phantom Thieves? I know originally there were plans to have her be one, there's even unused art of her in her Thief outfit... I look forward to next chapter :D

Is it me or are there meeting an unusual amount of assholes and douchebags in this game? The more I read this fanfic and the canon version, the more I believe that this game is a lot similar to "Danganronpa Another Episode", where children proclaim that adults are evil and that they must be perished. It even reminded me of how The Joker became the man he is due to society being cruel and corrupt.

Love the story so far, can’t wait to see how things pan out from here. Yavol

Great chapter! I am really looking forward to the next one!

Noooooo. Dont let Yoshizawa be an antagonist. I love her so.

Hi there

Ouch, Ren, got it 10 times worst in this fic, but he got some love at the end :-)

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!

I... Honestly don't know how I feel about this chapter.

In all honesty, Kasumi/Sumire's reason sounds more like an excuse... a bad one. And while I can get Ryuji believing her(because he is a good guy like that) but not Shiho, especially with how you have written her. And yes, I get that you probably did it go align more with Royal it still seems kinda... lazy I guess. It's like instead of her having a unique reason why, you decided to go with the easiest choice.

I'll stick around and read the next few chapters, but in all honesty I can see how they are probably going to go. And if I'm right I'm guessing that it will cause a bit of a divide between Ren/Ann and Ryuji/Shiho with Haru and Morgana being caught in the middle.

But anyway enough of that, keep it up and I hope you update soon.

How much of a douchebag do you have to be from forcing your child to end their romantic relationship!?

Well, my last review is now a chapter too old, but I still want to know what you plan on doing with Kasumi, if you hadn’t a plan you’d not put this much weight into her appearing in the story, so is she going to get a Persona? I am also curious as to how she’ll react to Ren and Shiho’s relationship(if we can call it that) and if Ren’s going to at least forgive her
I feel he can forgive but can’t forget

Great story, hope you continue it, and for Yusuke’s pairing it could be with either Futaba or Kasumi maybe? Also will anyone else other than Shiho who didn’t get a Persona in the original(or who wasn’t in the game) get one(mostly thinking of Kasumi or Mishima)?

You know what with the way this is going ren's palace should come into play here especially where it concerns sumire/kasumi either way you look at it the way he was broken would have led to him gaining a palace born of grief, rage and sorrow.

The fact that he doesn't have neither a palace nor a shadow concerns me on just how close to a mental shutdown he was... either way I'm very interested on how this is gonna be handled.