Reviews for Bughead series, My Serpent Queen
Aimy chapter 22 . 7/3
This is good but i'm just at the fight scene between Toni, Betty, Cheryl, and Jughead. And omg, this is getting steamy. Idk if i can handle it! lol
Aimy chapter 7 . 7/3
I love your story! What I love the most is that in your story, if Betty has a nightmare so does Jug, and if Betty gets hurt so does he. It's not the usual damsel is distress and the night in shining armor, but instead each comforting each other.
mersaydeez chapter 32 . 6/8
I love this chapter it shows how badass Betty can and how she can fight on her own
Guest chapter 110 . 6/1
These are so good please update :)!
Guest chapter 44 . 5/11
I have an idea for a chapter: Jellybean and Gladys finding out that Jughead has a girlfriend maybe when he is in Toledo with Archie. Also, them both meeting Betty.

These are really great and I am enjoying reading them
SPARKlingWinter chapter 110 . 5/8
I really like this series your doing, I would love to see more of it! This is just a suggestion, (I read this last night so I dont remember if you did this yet) A fatal motorcycle accident leaves Jughead Jones doing everything he can to save his girlfriend... And then here's another suggestion, Betty has been sick and no one knows why, until one day when Jughead finds her crying on her bed... She's holding something, something Jughead wasn't expecting to see... A positive pregnancy test...
Sara hodge chapter 47 . 4/26
Idk who to guess but these are so good they need to make its an actual episode
Divergentfangirl46 chapter 1 . 4/20
I love all of these. Please do one where Betty is neglected because Jughead is spending all of his time with the serpents and another where she is hurting herself an Jughead is there to comfort her. You are such an amazing writer.
TheLMAriel chapter 110 . 4/20
At first I thought it was my browser or something, but I don't think it is. I think there was an error when you uploaded the latest chapter. It's got all the coding for the fonts and indents and stuff.
Bughead88 chapter 110 . 4/19
This chapter makes no sense
Ladzinthelood chapter 54 . 4/12
Jughead POV is the best ️
Ansley chapter 93 . 4/4
you should definetily contiune this storyline. i love it!
Ansley chapter 84 . 4/4
I'm not even joking when I say I am crying laughing at sweet pea and fangs betting on bughead. i was laughing and screaming so hard the my sister ran into my room thinking i was hurt.
Ansley chapter 56 . 4/4
I really like the comforting scenes espically when betty takes care of jughead when he's sick
Ansley chapter 54 . 4/4
I love Jug's point of view. We get to see the soft, innocent side of him
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