Reviews for The Last Kaleidoscope
Ada1229 chapter 5 . 8/24
interesting that you included Hailee. Can we know eventually how Harry got her out of him? That'd be nice
Guest chapter 5 . 8/29/2019
If your stuck, maybe just get rid of the extra potter. I don’t know why you added her in the first place, but maybe that’s the reason for your block.
malinkody chapter 5 . 6/24/2019
Incredible story. Just love it. Was completely surprised by Hailee. Hopefully you will write more.
SakuraKoi chapter 5 . 2/18/2019
wow so good
Light Lord Cybergate chapter 5 . 1/9/2019
You know...I would have expected a LOT more questions about Harry's twin sister.
The Weasleys are way too calm about suddenly finding Harry with a sister which nobody knows about.

You'd think they would be very surprised about that!

Looking forward to whatever happens next.
Greer123 chapter 5 . 1/8/2019
Thank you for the new chapter of this story.
The Real Hell Fire chapter 5 . 1/5/2019
I'm guessing there is a very good reason why Hailee suddenly came to existence and it has something to do with Harry's weak Sharingan. By now it should at least have two tomoe in each eye and not one, what are you doing? I get that Sasuke discovered his eyes late in his childhood doesn't mean Harry needs to also. But what would Harry fear when standing in front of the boggart? Oh oh oh I know! How about a version of Harry in his adulthood with the exact copy of Madara's outside looks and personality that would attack his friends and trigger his Sharingan to enter the next level? Or Ginny dying that would do the same thing for Harry's Sharingan?
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 5 . 1/4/2019
Very interesting chapter! So if Hailee’s current body is “fragile”, how is she still basically “existing”? Very VERY interesting!

Loving this!
davycrockett100 chapter 5 . 1/4/2019
sweet
MegaKittyX chapter 5 . 1/4/2019
Wowza! The story sure has progressed! I mean, all this stuff happened in 5 chapters? Keep it up!
Aaron Leach chapter 5 . 1/4/2019
Awesome chapter.
Firesa chapter 5 . 1/4/2019
Thanks for the chapter!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 12/31/2018
Oh my! Hailee Potter?! Just WHAT is going on?! And what will this mean for the future?! I’m betting Dumbledore will be having a field day with all this!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 12/31/2018
Good chapter! Things are getting pretty interesting!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 1 . 12/31/2018
Most interesting of a start!
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