I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Im glad your posting this on AO3 too, most of my friends use that plataform and I can share it with them!

Hi there!

Just wanted to check in and make sure you're doing okay! I just saw my bookmark for this and realized how long it's been since I'd seen an update. The whole world seems to have gone to shit in the last few months and if you're feeling the anxiety like I am or have been hit hard by this I can more than understand not wanting update. I guess that's all I had. Just wanted to let you know I appreciate your writing and this story.

I look forward to your next update whenever that might be!

Stay safe and healthy!

Love it XD

Whooo! An update! OMG I'm so excited!

I can't wait to see what happens next! Hopefully some zolo/phina action!

Pleaaaaaaaase update soon!

i have missed your writing so much! hoping your back for good so i can be excited for more chapters! Besides that, the start of this chapter was so bittersweethow each of the boys experience their past:future so nice to see luffy with his birth mom maybe? aswell as zz pro who i’m guessing is his daughter? from the ‘traditional dance’ which of course is adorable as hellll! looking forward for the next update!

I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

i meaaan all i can say is WOOWWW. I’ve spent almost the whole day reading through this story .. I AM HOOOKED! First off- there aren’t many good zoro x oc stories anymore but finally finding yours has made my dayyy! I love the slow burn relationship beginning between seraphine and zoro, I just know something big will happen between them sooner or laterI cannot wait until they get to Alabastaso more action can startwe’ll see Seraphines snake side again! Please update soon i’m so ready for the next chapter

Omg! I love this! I adore how unique your plot line is and that you haven't rushed any of the relationships! Please please update soon!

Thank you for the long chapter! I was just starting to miss it again, but you came to the rescue! I was also sad that none of my good stories were updating and this cheered me up! Thanks!

I liked it looking forward to the next chapter

Just found your story and it’s fucking amazing! I love Sera so much her personality is amazing! Her and Zoro are funny together when they crack at each other! She really is the mom to Luffy and Chopper! It’s funny that Luffy is the cockblock between her and Zoro! And I don’t think your chapters are long they are perfect length! Anyways amazing story and I hope you have a wonderful day!

I don't think your chapters are too long at all! I do enjoy the history and the different way you've written things out. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Occasionally you have some word tense/form errors, but not enough to really detract from the story, and sometimes it seems as if Seraphina is out of practice at being aware f her surroundings, considering she claims the warrior title, and that her people are fierce, it would be cool to actually see her working on it.
Really looking forward to the Sky Island arc if we get there

Not to long at all! Maybe it's because I think time pass so fast when I'm reading.
I rather wait a little more and have longer chapters then shorter ones. That way the chapters contain more and I actually remembers what I read before.

Thanks for the chapter!

I was quite happy to see your update and even happier to see some mysteries bit by bit revealed to the crew. And look at that, Zoro being all observant and stuff.
To answer your question, your chapters are perfect length of that's what you want. Long chapters are a treat, but with short chapters you can update more often and we don't have to wait as long. Both is fine for me and I know that it's not easy to force yourself on chapter length, so I'd say whatever suits you best.
On another note, I saw your story on ao3 yesterday, will you update simultaneously or will you let it catch up with thist version?