Arctimon.

THE KARMIRO WRITER!

And seriously, man, I LOVE your work!

So excited to comment on every single one of the BH6 stories!

Starting with my original favorite (I guess these days it would be "Save The Date" or "Continuity").

So, "Magnetism."

First off, I like the callbacks you do. It's a technique I use, and I find it gives a sense of world building. I really like how you do it! Building off of previous events to make a story that fits!

1. The humor! There are so many great jokes! I love Hiro blushing and his confession she looked pretty in that dress! I love the banter and that Karmi laughed for so long about the super strength! I love the onion ring conversation (it sounds like they would say that!)! I love the thunking! I love "...Huh." (I like ending stories with those kind of words!). I just love all the humor in play!

2. Your dedication! All the sciencey stuff! I find that kind of research hard at times, but you just knock it out of the park!

3. Hiro and Karmi. Not just the humor, but everything! The way they talk, the way they interact, the insecurities, the feels, the small moments... Heck, you made Hiro helping her on a project sound heartwarming!

4. Hiro criticizing Captain Cutie. Just brilliant!

5. I also love the whole "Hiro knows when Karmi leaves the lab" thing. IT IS VERY SUSPICIOUS, HIRO!

To sum up, this story is so lovely! It's small but fluffy, which is practically my favorite genre! It's only the beginning, but you can feel how Hiro and Karmi are taking steps (pun not intended for the next one) in the right direction!

Beautiful writing, excellent characterization, hilarious jokes...

What more could I ask for?

I love your work! Thanks for making it!

Can't wait to review "Steps"!

I really like how you write the characters here and I agree with you. This show doesn't get much attention and it is good. It has flaws but overall I liked it quite a lot. I really do like Karmi's character in the show and I hope we get more of her in season 2.

Well done. Looks like I’m going to have to check out your other stuff... maybe I’ll get lucky and come across some bbrae.

Loved, especially a good chunk of the humor:

"...made his head spin.
THUNK!
...Speaking of heads, the sure sounded like one."

omg TTuTT so good thank you fhsuiodhskjfh i love Karmi
is there going to be a part two, with those last lines? BD

Great story! Yeah Karmi is not the most likable person on the show, and contentious to boot. She is however very true to real life, in some ways she is the opposite side of the same coin as Hiro. Without Tadishi, Hiro could have been a shut in. Never socially interacting with people except at Bot fights, and in those cases he would be conning them. Really liking the premise of this story thus far. Can't wait to read more!

Good story. Everyone seems to be in character and it's believable through their interactions. I personally hope you make more and I can't wait to read them.

waitttttt... I thought he threw a door at Fred

Awesome and very enjoyable oneshot. :)

This is pretty good.

Me hubiera gustado que lo continuaras pero sera una capitulo único, verdad? :'3
esta bien u.u'
me gusto mucho y espero escribas otro muy pronto :D
ya quería leer algo de Karmi x Hiro pero casi no hay fanfics, al menos no en mi idioma n.ñ'
gracias por este fanfic :)
hasta la próxima! :3

Oh no tell me Karmi's not Cindy Vortex nor is she Penny Peterson all over again!

Karmi and Hiro - Oh no, not another rival pair like Jimmy and Cindy and Sherman and Penny

Dang it! Just when things are getting interesting, too...

This is really good! I like that you showed Karmi's softer side near the end.

Honestly, I really wish you continued this...oh well.

Keep up the good work!

Not the biggest fan of Karmi, whom I consider too much of a creator pet. Still, you managed to write the scene between she and Hiro with the right chemistry and without seeming forced at all. Well done.

P.s
I'm sorry on my last comment, I didn't know you weren't a girl. Sorry Jason

Take care