please update

that was a great chapter and I can't wait for more:)

I like it

I love your story. are you going to continue it, I hope you do.

Poor Link I hope that everything gets better for him

It all felt too abrupt, almost to the point of kinda being comedic, especially at the part where Demise throws a fireball at Zelda and she justinstantly dies.

The formatting is like a scrpit and you don't elaborate on emotions, thoughts or other important, atmospheric things. There were some issues with the grammar too, but I'll let it slide for now.

But honestly, keep writing. You're clearly just starting out and have alot of potential. And although I recommend researching tips to improve your writing and make your stories more immersive, in the end as long as you're having fun, anything goes.

Those were just some gripes I had with this, but nonetheless I encourage you to continue :)

This seems really interesting so far. Can't wait to see what comes next :)

I really like it!