You know if you write stories for people to review. then you are doing it for the wrong reasons. JKR. made a mint on Harry Potter. but you don't see her crying I'm not going to do the next book because no one is reviewing it. Write for your self not others then you will be happier with what you write.

How about Salazar?

This is wonderful

Yoooo please don't abandon this story!
Please, I love it

Favorite song of Hamilton. So perfect for this scene. I could see it before my eyes. Kudos

love it please write more

I liked it a lot,

I like this story. I love the pairing with Holly and the twins, that is a cool pairing. I'm glad you didn't abandon the story.

Interesting story!

Love this story

I really enjoyed this story and am glad you are doing a sequel. Thanks so much.

I just found this story and I really enjoyed it! Your character portrays are absolutely charming and every word enchanted me and I just wanted to read more about this world you have created for these loveable characters.

Interesting start but far too sweet for my taste so I couldn't finish this first chapter. Everyone is just too wonderful and perfect to be true, and looking at the chapter names: zoo, birthday, yule, shopping(!) etc I wonder if there'll be any tension or conflict beyond deciding what flavour ice cream to pick. Good luck with it though because your reviewers seem to be enjoying it and it sounds a decent idea so far. Just lacks any subtlety with its over-flowery language and 'niceness'.

- Hip

Amazing story,I love it.

I love this story a lot the chapter was great :)