Reviews for X13 Domestic Troubles
kirbyschoice chapter 21 . 6/19
Just spent s pleasant evening reading this amazing story once again. Blue Bloods isn’t on and I needed some Danny & Maria fun! Love them both and hoping they will soon be a couple on the actual show.

I’m just curious if you ever plan to write a new story on them? I really enjoy your stories on Danny and Maria!

Thanks for a wonderful evening of reading a great love story Blue Bloods related!
Newbie chapter 21 . 11/18/2018
Sat down and read this and your other story (Rebuilding) in one sitting! What an amazing stories! Hope you continue these stories featuring Danny and Maria! Great stuff!
Bookdiva2016 chapter 17 . 10/14/2018
Love this chapter.
bookdiva2016 chapter 21 . 10/14/2018
Love the baby's name and that Maria & Danny were locked in on solving their cases before the baby's birth.

Great chapter to wrap up this wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it each day and felt you captured Danny and Maria so well. Thanks for sharing this one.

If you have the time, would it be possible for us to get an epilogue chapter on how the new Reagan family is doing with baby Hanna and Maria and Danny as married partners?
dragonsprit chapter 21 . 10/14/2018
Excellent story Thanks for sharing.
bfox1973 chapter 21 . 10/14/2018
great job, love turning nesting into closing cases...
Troubled-Angel-26 chapter 21 . 10/14/2018
I loved this chapter I bet Dooley was glad they were off now

And aww lovey name
Can’t wait to read more
Troubled-Angel-26 chapter 20 . 10/13/2018
Aww this was a truly lovely chapter can't wait to read moren
Troubled-Angel-26 chapter 19 . 10/12/2018
i enjoyed this chapter, im glad thats all he wanted i loved how maria smoked him on the range, and eddie
im glad he got 75 years im assuming, at least shes free now
BJames chapter 18 . 10/11/2018
This review is gonna be brief. If I could put in one expression, this is itOuch.”
And while I may have a shred of sympathy for Baez' behavior in this case, I am mad at Danny.

He loves to explode at people, considering this is his family, even far too often. Jamie didn't deserve his anger this time.
However, it's probably the opinion of the minority, so don't worry about it.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Troubled-Angel-26 chapter 18 . 10/11/2018
Oh no poor Maria

That cop was an ass they way he was so nochlant about it

Oops poor Jamie and poor Maria.
Troubled-Angel-26 chapter 17 . 10/10/2018
Good for sean for calling jamie Out I'm glad he made it up with both.

Danny's comment to Jamie is true when he said wait till eddies pregnant though I can see him being worse

Can't wait to read more
bookdiva2016 chapter 16 . 10/9/2018
I like that Maria's mother had the chance to get to know Danny and the boys at dinner since Maria has been going to the Reagan family dinner each week. Nice touch!

I figured some drama would come up soon but was surprised that Jamie was the one rather than Henry. While I think that Jamie has a right to ask questions about the speed of things, I am not sure that after the family dinner was the right place knowing Danny's temper and because everyone was there. Jamie probably should have gone out with Danny to express his concerns privately because he was a little aggressive here. I appreciate Frank's explaining to Jamie more about the decisions of Danny and Maria since he had asked similar questions of the two. His further explaining his objection to Eddie and Jamie working together/engaged was interesting but this seems like a double standard, although I see the distinction between on the street cops and detectives.

Will Sean and Uncle Jamie discuss Danny and Maria while they play basketball and hang out? A conversation here might shed some light to Jamie on why the boys are so happy about the new baby, the upcoming nuptials and the relationship between Danny and Maria as well as the one between Maria and the boys.

Looking forward to the next chapter! Thanks for a great story!
BJames chapter 16 . 10/9/2018
Well, glad to see (almost) everyone is getting along here. I must state though that Frank couldn't make this statement: He's adopting his own kid. At least to me it doesn't make sense, and secondly Danny has been aggressive for no good reason, so I hope he'll apologize for that. And furthermore, shooting Jamie down for his comments is Frank's thing, you got that to a 'T'. However, it would've been nice, if Danny had told his siblings privately beforehand. If anything, I blame Danny for not communicating his intentions to his siblings correctly. And he wouldn't have dared to do anything this rough with Erin, so this behavior wasn't justified at all. If I was Jamie, Danny wouldn't get an apology. Before I forget, I didn't notice that Jamie was taking issue with Danny and Maria still being partnered that's not his style. Even if he did though, he'd have a point and Frank would owe him an explanation.

While I am not happy with Danny in this chapter, I am happy about you. This was wonderfully written. Looking excitedly forward to the next update.

And this is just me rambling. Do whatever you think is best.
Troubled-Angel-26 chapter 16 . 10/9/2018
Aww this chapter was lovely

Oh no jamies being an arse and hypocritical tbf

I loved the ending
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