Reviews for Abandoned Brother- Brother Series Book 1
quicksilver123 chapter 1 . 5/7
Omg love it, please make a sequel or book 2, can’t wait for more, thanks x
Hanna Bauer chapter 1 . 4/22
Hey ich find die Geschichte Mega gut. Charlie nimmt Clay mit und er wird gefangen. Aber Bravo kommt auch wenn er noch keine Teammitglied ist sie nehmen ihn in ihre Familie auf. Das Gespräch zwischen Jason und Clay ist super.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/27/2019
This is soooooo good, we need more sickly wheezy clay and his brothers taking care of him...
Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2019
I loved this so much, was wondering if you’d be writing more in this series, maybe with Clay dealing with the lasting complication of asthma and how they deal with it on missions etc
sarasidle3 chapter 1 . 10/7/2019
I would love to see Clay dealing with the fallout of what ash said in the interview they didnt do anything in the show, would maybe love to see Clay as a single dad going through green team and Bravo finding out when they have to rescue him from whatever issue. Will look forward to reading more. xoxo
Lou chapter 1 . 9/15/2019
I came to see if you had posted any more stories, so I read this one again! Hope you continue in this fandom. You did a great job!
Guest chapter 1 . 9/1/2019
I just reread this amazing story for probably the fifth time and I can honestly say that this is one of the best Seal Team stories I have ever read. The Clay whump is just so good and you have all the characters spot-on. I loved the way you described Clay’s thoughts when he was escaping and as well as the desperation of the team to find him. Simply the best!

I do hope you come back to this fandom again, because you are a truly gifted writer and we can never have enough Clay whump. So, this is me asking you to please write another Clay hurt story.

I have had this idea in my head for quite some time now where Clay gets hurt whilst on a mission, but they cannot get airlifted out and he has to be treated in the field, but without proper medication and the team needs to hold him down and quiet, whilst Trent basically operates on him. I know you will be able to write something amazing for this.

I could not review under my username as I have reviewed this story before - megth
stranded chess piece chapter 1 . 7/22/2019
This was such a beautiful fic! Thank you so much for your amazing writing. I was pulled in from the beginning. All characters were perfect. Plot was extremely well thought out. I really do hope you write some more for Seal Team - you do it very very well!
jennyhale chapter 1 . 6/21/2019
I love this!
Are you planning on writing more? It's been almost a year since you published this, so I don't know... I hope you do :D
Guest chapter 1 . 5/30/2019
I read this when you first published it and I started thinking about it again today and decided to reread it. It’s very well written and has a great plot line. I hope you write another story soon!
BlindAlley05 chapter 1 . 5/27/2019
You have to write more Seal Team stories! This story, I could barely stop reading it! You have a gift for writing and I'm hoping to see more Seal Team stories!
summeronice chapter 1 . 4/30/2019
I really liked your story, I really hope you don't forget to follow up
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2019
Really great story, I had to read it all in one sitting, so not much sleep but worth it.

I hope there are follow up stories full of whump, action and family in it. It's a great back story you have set even if now AU to the series that doesn't matter.
Tanger chapter 1 . 3/20/2019
I absolutely loved this! I hope we get to read Book 2 one day! You reflect the characters so well!
camille chapter 1 . 3/19/2019
Still in love with this story.
Would love another chapter or sequal.
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