Reviews for Awakening of the Phantom |
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Crossoverlover242 chapter 4 . 8/4 Good god how are super good at making a great story and sex scenes? Love the story I hope you update soon. |
shi no saishi chapter 4 . 4/24 A well written and compelling story, consider me invested. I don't think you even really need the lemons to keep a reader's attention for this (alot of lemon stories are heavy smut, no plot, I prefer the opposite). My personal preferences for a story aside, well done! I look forward to more. |
Clamanatha chapter 4 . 4/21 Here's a suggestion for the story: This is an idea I previously mentioned to RedKnight21 and he implemented in his Lady Lucks Favor fic, but how about you have Desiree become a teacher at Danny's school? Keep up the good work, this fic is amazing! |
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 4 . 4/18 great chapter. |
jh831 chapter 4 . 4/5 You have miss belum, why not use mr. Mayor. I got the P.P girls reference. |
SonicMax chapter 4 . 3/21 Raven? Awesome. What about Starfire? Maybe blackfire? Oh man too many girls to list. |
Dylan-A-Friend chapter 4 . 3/20 Nice! |
shugokage chapter 4 . 3/19 Interesting story! |
RedKnight21 chapter 4 . 3/19 Got to say you really have a knack for writing lemon! Very interesting idea with the relationship between jazz and Paulina, I did not see that coming and I don't think I could come up with something like that. I hope to see not only more lemon but some action as well. |
Shadowdragondanny chapter 4 . 3/19 Love it can’t wait for more |
te.nellis chapter 4 . 3/18 Epic! Keep it up! |
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 4 . 3/18 Hot damn! This chapter was literal fire, with action and romance at the forefront. Danny means to turn the town of Amityville into a city as famous if not more than Gotham and Metropolis. Basically turn Amityville into a world wide known Titan. |
aquestionableprecence chapter 4 . 3/18 Interesting chapter, but I'm rather curious as to why Ember is the 'alpha', is it because she was the first one or what...? |
Runeion chapter 4 . 3/17 Holli from cool world? Is this Raven from teen titans or daughter of darkness? The way Danny is developing the town would it make Poison ivy and Undergrowth into allies? |
The wolf god Fenrir chapter 4 . 3/17 I love it |