Reviews for What comes next: surviving living
Levenez chapter 24 . 6/6
What a story... so many emotions, so well rendered and described... I cried a lot for many chapters, but this is a different sort of chase and misunderstanding than canon, with some heavy plotting against them! But a great story. Thank you so much.
miss random chapter 24 . 5/9
I’ll have you know, I’ve cried through nearly every chapter here. So. Many. Feels.
Guest chapter 24 . 3/11
Absolutely breathtaking story! I read it in on go, and now will read it again just to savor the little details. Spectacular!

Well, I hope the Colonel lives a very long life. If Elizabeth were to be widowed again, and AAAAGAIN misinterpret the feelings of a man for her, she would make the Guiness Book as the blindest, most incapable of reading character and sentiment person that has ever lived. So, I hope their HEA lasts forever!
smileforsun chapter 24 . 2/19
Wow. I have so many mixed emotions. This was devastating and beautiful and I'll probably come back to it again and again. I'm amazed at how well you portrayed grief. I love that it wasn't the end. This is a masterpiece, even though (or maybe especially because) it wasn't what I expected. Thank you so much!
Colleen s chapter 24 . 9/3/2019
Lovely story! Some sad parts of course but that is unpredictable life! But a definitely happy ending. AND beginning!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/27/2019
Loved your story and that these two found one another finally. But feel let down by Darcy's deliberate silence on his plans about Elizabeth. Thats not the Darcy we know.
Wish this ending could have come about without him having turned dark.
Guest chapter 24 . 7/14/2019
Thank you so much for this story. I am embarrassed by how much it occupies me and I think about the people you've created and their lives. Thank you thank you thank you.
MerytonMiss chapter 1 . 7/12/2019
At last!

However, that Darcy, knowing his cousin's heart, didnt even inform his cousin of his intentions toward Elizabeth, that the Colonel had to learn of the matter indirectly and after the fact is more horrible than anything Elizabeth accused Darcy of at Hunsford! Especially since, in canon, he learnedof his selfishness from her tirade at Hunsford and learned to be better and thus worthy of her. But in this version, he still performed one last over the top bit of selfishness in pursuing her and so I doubt that he deserved her and wonder that Stephen can still feel any loyalty to him at all.
Ann chapter 24 . 7/5/2019
I loved this story. Elizabeth's emotions, her dealing with grief, the actions and advice of those who cares for her were all so real and touching. The self centered Fitzwilliam family members were just the right amount of trouble. Stephen is the kindest, and strongest man. Great story!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/5/2019
I very much enjoyed this story! Elizabeth was a bit of a ninny toward the end but I am glad her mistake didn’t get carried too far. So glad for their happy ending!
GemmaDarcy chapter 24 . 7/5/2019
Finally! I love these two together - in fact, the Col is the only acceptable alternative to Darcy.

Your story was heartbreaking and breathtaking, with heavy grief, but so much love. Thank you for sharing it with us.
alisquire chapter 19 . 7/7/2019
I have loved your story it has made me feel every emotion and obsessed with updates! I really hope you continue to add to this story what was in Richard's letter? Thank you for taking the time to write and post x
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2019
Dear Author

I so loved your story and although it was truly sad about Darcy and Georgiana, it was really moving to see her come back to life and love So moving. I loved it
Guest chapter 24 . 7/4/2019
We need an epilogue! :-) Don't let it end yet, give us one more chapter, please!
Guest chapter 24 . 7/4/2019
A truly fantastic story
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