This sounds really interesting!
I love your style so far, can't wait to read more!

This is a good start. Very interesting and engaging.
I have one tip, please use line breaks. It could be XXX,, or whatever, it's your choice. But the scene changes need something to say that they are happening.
Kudos. God bless.
-Silver

I couldn't not read this after seeing the spooks reference in your summary