this is it! some RtN!Hinata... hah!

not related but wow a had some typos lol sorry.

honestly the only problem I have with this is the same with all similar stories. they are 10. if they were older it would be cool but at 10 kids haven't even had their first wet dream and the only thing they want a girlfriend for us to hold hands and say they have one. do it's a bit whack. wouldn't have been that hard to push back the break untill Shippuden or have the training trip be the cause for it? like Naruto is gone and she starts to spiral and comes across some bitch talking shit, stabstabstab, split and move from there? but more development for yandere and Naruto, add a few Sakura scenes make the alter show flashes of being their throughout the academy that way they don't run to Yamanakas. maybe kurenei noticing something up but writing it of or rationalizing it as "for the better" like a black Mamba persona. skirt by Yamanaka. and not have 10 year olds dry humping each other? like I see flashes of what could be, and I enjoy the story, then I get reminded that they are in the academy, they are super young, and it's a ninja village filled with paranoid serial killers for hire. so it wouldn't fly. idk. maybe just me. show that people are noticing it, and are wary/scared have her torture someone for fucking with Naruto, have her father see her with his x-ray vision in her room being weird and taking steps to help/guide her. they are a murder village they know how to deal with psychos and probably laid them and consider them prodigy's or something. being willing to torture and murder at 10? for your comrades? sound like will if fire to me chiefs. let's make sure there is no political backlash and curb some of the more violent tendencies on Konoha civiles. mostly non lethal or get good at covering up your tracks kinda deal. it's a military dictatorship, what's a few civvies fucking with my law regarding Naruto? it's has a tone of cringe because all I can imagine is a little girl, in small clothes yelling threats and talking about her boyfriend and I cringe. like you don't mean it but that's just what I get.

hope this helps? yeah let's go with that. like the concept not so much the way it happens. thanks for uploading.

continualo esta historia se ve prometedora

i have to admit that i was a bit worried about a yandera hinata but im loving it cause its very well written. i so cant wait to see what happens with this story and honestly, swap the teams. at the way hinata is, shed probably kill kida or atleast cripple him to make sure that naruto is on her team...or do the same to sakura.

Lol savage Hinata

Honestly don't mind the yandere personality, a little unnerved sure but it is well written so far.

change to hinata by sakura I want to see how she acts with sasuke XD

Loved it! Super cute fluff on top of Hinata being refreshingly unique!

LOVED it! Such a unique spin on this typical but loved pairing.

Switch teams. Nice and simple. Although it pain me to write it, Team 7 has been done a LOT. Perhaps too much for some, too little for others. Other reviewers who posted their ideas on the subject did kinda shift my mind into a 50/50, so in the end I wouldn't mind either.

Side Note: The stabbing scene reminded me of Toga's personality (MHA). I liked that. Minus the stabbing scene of course. I don't like people getting stabbed repeatedly.

Its like dating twins?! best of both worlds Naruto.

if you are keeping things cannon for naruto and hinata let them hide their true skills but still let hinata keep her two mind sets while she secretly trains with naruto

Ahhh. Such a good fic

Switch Naruto and Kiba.