Oh Pete, Pete, Pete. Okay, he is a little kid who doesn't understand the world he's in or how the people there deal with this kind of stuff, I should cut him some slack. Either that or now he's sleepwalking. I don't really know, whenever I predict or assume something will happen in this story, it'll always do something I didn't expect. Don't take that the wrong way, that's not a bad thing, it's just something I'm noticing. But speaking of which, I remember back when around chapter 32 and 33 came out and I was convinced that Elliott was going to join forces with the side of evil like Anakin Skywalker. I even made up my own nickname for his evil persona, Darthorn. Boy has that possibility become less and less likely, but maybe that's for the best. Well, see ya next time.

OH SHIT, WHAT UP! Just when you think things are looking up, another crappy thing happens. I know I've already said this before, but will these characters ever get a break? Okay, I guess they did when they killed Xetgupa, but still. Hopefully this new conflict can be resolved at the very least some-what easily. Either way, I'll see you then.

For a minute there, I actually thought you killed her off for real, but she's alive. I'm sorry I haven't commented in a while, I guess I just temporally lost interest, but I'm back, now. I don't know what's going to happen next, but whatever does, I'll see you then.
(P.S, I've been listening to an Super Mario Logan video while reading this (if you don't know what SML is, that doesn't really matter) and the ending, honestly is almost exactly like the ending of this chapter, with a character dying, and coming back to life.)

Why do I feel as though I'm going to be humming Zippity Doo Dah as they go down that waterfall in the next chapter?

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Okay, Let me try to unpack everything I just read. So, this Qulpari named Ihyokxa, tried to become one with Elliott, messed with his head, spit him out when he found what I assume was Sovirox's tracker, and Charlie found him, along with Sovirox. Wow, I can't began to guess where this is heading next. Now I'm just wondering how Charlie found Elliott. Well, if I had to make a guess, one of the others at the "campsite" woke up to find Elliott gone, put together that he must've went sleep walking again, and sent Charlie to find him, and either Sovirox found Charlie first, or he found Charlie and Elliott once they found each other. I'm sure you'll explain it next time, anyway, but it's always fun to overthink. So, I guess I'll see you next time.

Alright, first things first. Is Peter actually the same Peter/StarLord in Guardians of the Galaxy, thous connecting them in the same universe, or just an alternative version of him? (which would explain the Rocket plush) And wow, I can't believe Sovirox is still able to find Elliott. I wanted to believe Elliott's family were able to find him, but seeing what happened when Elliott had that... uhh, I'd say wet dream, but it ended before his "fun" began, so I don't really know. Either way, I hope Elliott will not only be saved, but everyone else will believe him when he says he sleepwalked. Also, thanks for using a good portion of my suggestion, I really do appreciate that on a personal level. I can't wait to see what happens next. (P.S, I've been thinking about making a "Portrayed By SpongeBob" video of your story, and I just wanted to know if you were okay with it. (seeing how it is your story)

BRUH, I KNOW YOU DID NOT JUST KILL OFF GERTIE! Okay, I know this is your story and all, but this suggestion is one I'd appreciate on a personal level if you took it. (Not that I'd expect you would (please don't take that the wrong way) Have Elliott bang on a wall or other surface in the room, over and over, repeatably shouting no. (kind of like that one part in Monster's Inc when Mike and Sully were banished) ET and Lori try to comfort him, but they fail due to depression. Elliott then begs ET if there's any way, shape, or form they can bring her back, like with Charlie and him when he was back on Earth, the last one specialty since that moment from the movie has barely if at all been mentioned in this story yet. ET sadly tells him that there isn't a way, she isn't like them (referring to Qulpari). Elliott looks down in defeat, but when all seems lost, someone walks into the room (a new character or someone we've seen before) and says there might be a way to bring Gertie back, but not only is the key word there "might", it's too risky. Elliott practically begs for this character to tell him. And he/she/it does and I'll let you decide if you take this suggestion. (like I said, you don't have to, though I would appreciate it) As for anything else, just explain how Gertie got like that and how Roy and Norenio saved Elliott. Alright, that's all from me for now.

Wow, this is just crazy. This whole time, Yatgibi was tricking Elliott into reviving an evil entity, Sovirox is the reason Elliott sleep walked, Meazquad died trying to save Elliott, and now he's falling to his death. This is dark, but cool at the same time. Now, I'm sure Elliott is going to be saved at the last second, but the question is, who or what's going to save him? And once he is, then what will happen? Will it be revealed that Gertie managed to kill or at least damage Sovirox, if the latter, will it lead to a climactic fight, or will this story really go "Revenge Of The Sith" and Elliott will turn on his loved ones? I don't know, but either way, I'll find out soon enough.

Hmm, intresting. I hope Lori will forgive Elliott later. I have a feeling that with Elliott's dark powers becoming stronger, we might be getting a "Revenge Of The Sith" situation coming soon. That is if Elliott gets his powers back (hopefully if he does, it doesn't come to that). As always, see you next time! Oh, and Happy New Year!

Well if we haven't gone down the rabbit hole before, we definitely have now. I don't know why, but whenever I see that a new chapter of this story is posted, my heart starts pumping. Why am I telling you this, I honestly have no idea. I don't have much to say about when ET showed up except for this, how did he and Norenio know where the main three were? And now, the rest of the story. Let's start with the fact that the moment with Elliott and dream Lori had me in disbelief, like I was going: they're going to get caught, they're going to get caught, they're going to get caught, they're going to ge- You get the idea. Yeah, that twist really did surprise me. I'm starting to worry about Elliott's mental state. If I had to make a theory, I'd say that the side affects from when he tested his wilting powers back in Chapter 28 is kicking in and his mind is slowly unraveling. I personally think next chapter should be about Yatgibi seeing how Elliott is unhinched, teaches him how to control his anger powers. I'll see you next time and I hope your having a good holiday season.

Very interesting chapter. I hope later into the story Elliott will be able to restore any damage he left on Gertie. Speaking of which, I like how she's trying to act more mature, I'm just wondering how Roy's gonna react to what happened while the main three were gone. Seeing how this chapter ended with Spike showing that he has the same scar as he gave Lori, I have a feeling we might get a backstory on him next time. As always, see you then.
(PS, did you see that ET Xfinity commercial? If so, how did you feel about it?)

That is some a-spicy drama. I'll start off by saying the beginning scene was very well done. From my opinion (at least) there was no real right answer, Roy was in the right for trying to talk sense into Elliott and Lori, but on the other hand, he really shouldn't have chosen to do so right after everything happened. So yeah, I'm kind of taking both sides. As for suggestions, all I say is that at some part in the next chapter, Elliott says that he needs a moment to himself. And during this moment to himself, Gertie finds him and they have an honest conversation.
For the sake of example, Elliott says that he feels like he's been acting like an idiot lately, Gertie says she hasn't been very smart either, and that they need to stick together and stop acting stupid if they're gonna get used to their new lives. You could have Lori be apart of that scene too, while she's a bit more reluctant, she reminds herself that Elliott and Gertie need her as much as she needs them.
I suggest this because I honestly think these three need a moment to come to terms with what's in store for the future and to remember how much they need one another. But that's just me, I'll see ya next time.

Whoa, that ending! I did not expect Elliott to make that move. Alright, now it's suggestions time!
I highly suggest that at the beginning of the next chapter have Elliott think about what he just did and realize he shouldn't have made that stunt. He leaves the house, only to run into ET and Norenio, knowing that they went into the house, but saying that they won't say anything to Rob or the courts as they don't want them to get into more trouble. Elliott then asks where Lori and Gertie went, and they say that they're at a stand near by, but Elliott desides to let them be and fix his little mess later. They next day on their way back to where Lori was doing her sentence (yes, she decided to not leave), Elliott sits next to her and apologizes for making that move so fast, saying how he wasn't thinking straight at the time, following by Lori saying she understands and forgives him.
And that's all I have for next time, if you do take this suggestion, the rest of the chapter is up to you. See ya then.

I partly feel like that Qulpari was just bluffing to convince Elliott to open the door. Now, if I were you, I would make Elliott's negative thoughts have to do with one certain thing that happened to him earlier in this story. No, I'm not talking about Jimmy, instead, I'm talking about the last time he saw his mother. He would think about how (while it was reluctant) she let the government take him and Gertie away, and the more he thought of it, the more angry he got, which is what opens the door. I think that would make sense, but of course, you don't have to do that. See you next time and Happy Late Halloween.

Oh boy, Elliott might be in some trouble. But I'm glad we got a bit of Ellori (Elliott x Lori) in here. I can't wait to see what happens next.