Update soon. I want to know what happens next.

This is a great story. I’m glad you are continuing to update it and I can’t wait for the next chapter!

i like suzuka/bakugo dynamic, even if at times it's bipolar, thats attributed to bakugo's foot on mouth syndrome that is set to change as we go along the arcs. I like how soft he can be for his dori; but if theres something that has been bothering me from the sports festival arc is that suzuka is using support items. when it was stipulated that no one other that support students and those who need it for medical purposes / have special permission (ie aoyama) are able to. im sure others have said their part on this but i would like to say mine...

suzuka got a glider suit and got to use her helmet, even if she lost the tournament bracket i found it unfair on the other contestants. no one else got to use items but her. it would have been cool for her to improvise or experiment the extent of her powers WITHOUT items as it's the point of the games, specially for hero students; like actively trying to make herself glide with sheer kinetic energy, if it was too much for her then use it as a small plus ultra at important beats of the race. Or like during the tournament, if she needs to be sensorially depraved to concentrate the best (seeing kinetic energy with her helmet is a plus) then making her battle WITH HER EYES CLOSED would have had a greater impact on her training and specially on the audience. i mean, she could have done it, hadnt she trained with bakugo like that before? (albeit with a blindfold and noise cancellation earphones but you get the idea)

im liking the story, i really am but this is an important aspect of the arc where i think dori got an unfair and unfoundable advantage. we all knew bakugo was to win their battle, but how she got there kind of degrades her progress and power, cause she was using items technically not allowed to her while others couldnt

im sorry if this puts you down, already got other authors either go into hiatus or block me because i identified stuff that didnt set well with me storywise even when i suggested how it could have been fixed; not just plainly saying i hated it. im saying what is wrong to me, why, and how i think YOU could improve on the long run. im just doing my part as a dedicated reader who wants to see her authors identify mistakes from grammar to plot or characterization ones.

yes it's your story and if youre doing this for pure fun or a way to improve on your own writing you decide how it goes. i KNOW how constructive criticism can be, i would know i studied in an art program. but it's your decision on how you act on it what matters. you can either make heed and put a pin on it or plainly ignore it and continue as you are. wish i could say this to the author who blocked me (sent me a message before but cant read it cause they blocked me lol) but i hope this helps you

sorry for the rambles, had to rant a bit...

thanks for the update! i curious as to how bakugo will later react to suzuki breaking his hand, it's an important aspect of who he is even if it's an easy fix with RG. either way wanna see dori rooting for her boy... boys lol
keep it up and take care!

An excellent chapter! I really like Suzuka, yknow? Thank you for sharing! Cheers!

I love your fanfictions so much always looking forward to a chapter. You never really disappointed either. This is my new favorite my hero academia fanfic ever. Keep up the amazing work you do _

it's been a while since I've read a midoriya twin fic but I gotta say I absolutely love yours! suzuka is amazing and I love her relationship with everyone! I can't wait for the battles! :D

Me at any moment Suzuka and Katsuki are in the same roomNow KISS"
Also me when I remember "Dori" isn't just a play off Midoriya but is his way of calling her "DollNOW KISS"
My soul when they show their feelings for each otheroh. Ooh. OH HO HO! OhMahFeckingGawdICantHandleItButGiveMeMoreis slain by tension and leaves body*

I just read all of this through and it is absolutely amazing! I’m so excited to see how Katsuki will react to Suzuka after her win and her saving his life. I’m so excited for the next chapter! But definitely take your time in writing it and don’t feel pressured to put it out early, I know how hard writers block is!

Update soon. This is good.

I absolutely love this story! I was so happy to see it updated again :) looking forward to the next chapter!

Nice!

This story is absolutely amazing and not ooc at all. The character development of Suzuka has me drooling and eagerly waiting for more. I can't wait to see how she's going to turn out now that she's focusing on doing things for herself, not just other people. There is a line between self care and and being selfish, between being selfless and being a mitre and it is clearly defined in your story. Also huge fan of Bakugou in general and your portrayal of him is amazing, I'm glad that you can accurately describe him and all of his contradictory, honest, tsundere nature. He has a superiority complex and an inferiority complex. You really show how he can be so mature and yet completely childish. Overall beautifully done. Thank you so much for sharing this with us and I look forward to more of your work!

I’m really enjoying this so far! I like the dynamics between Katsuki and Suzuka, and I cant wait to read more! Thanks for writing this story!

Normally, I don’t really like Bakugo all that much, but somehow, I’m finding myself enjoying this and shipping them. A lot. Cx

Really love this story! I can't wait for more!