good story it fits well

Aaaaaaaawwwwwwwww, this was so sweet!

Very nice! A bit repetitive though but I could hardly take my eyes off it

This is such a heart filling story for me, personally, especially since its between Milo and Kira. I SUPPORT THE SHIP. MIDA (or Kill :D) ALL THE WAY, UNTIL THE END OF THE UNIVERSE! AND HAIL TO ATLANTIS!

3 3 Too much fluffiness, loved it. 3 3

Wow, this was one of the best Atlantas storie I've ever read! Wonderful job, made me feel good after reading it. :D

I love this fic . Milo x Kida forever !

I love this! I'm a big fan of the film, and when I read your story, I heard the character's voices. In other words...this was totally awesome!

Awwwwww! Very sweet!

I found this fic on an old Atlantis fansite while browsing the interwebs, to give some background as to why I'm reviewing a 7-year-old story, but it was worth the time to put something down. I don't read much fanfiction, only posting it, because there's always something about the stories that feel off. Either someone's out of character, or a million and a half mistakes are carelessly allowed to exist.

Your work has neither of these awful flaws, and I found it quite easy to read through. Your writing style is simplistic, but that's not a bad thing; it doesn't waste the space that more prosy language does. I felt that you told a nice story in a length that was befitting of your plot length, essentially one scene. It was a concise story that I quite enjoyed.

I also felt you did rather well with something that almost any Atlantis fanfiction writer gets wrong: Kida's lines. It can be hard to write Kida's dialogue as a writer; without Cree Summers's accented voice to speak them, they look rather awkward. Even I feel like I don't get the Queen of Atlantis quite right half the time, and it's something I pay special attention to. You had some lines that sounded strange with her as well, but not to the point where I could deem her out-of-character.

While your writing was clean and free of errors, I feel repetition was your greatest weakness. I haven't read any of your later works, as in works beyond this fic, so this may have been something you've fixed; Kida said the word "Tahbtoap" no less than 13 times in the brief space of her walking to his body. This exists with a few other words too, where the sentences are a bit cookie-cutter and/or frequently used, but it is a problem that pales in comparison to the work as a whole. You maintained the title's theme to the story: losing and finding. It seems a simple thing to say, but it's very easy to get off track by the end of the story.

Overall, I give a 9/10. Though it wasn't "the" Milo and Kida fanfic, what you provided was an enjoyable piece that let me look a little longer at my favorite Disney pairing.

-Kuann

This was such an adorable story :D. I'm glad Milo and Kida at least have some fanfiction of their own. Beautiful story :)

I almost fell in love with this story 3

It's so cute and romantic...I couldn't imagine that I would like the ROMANTIC fanfic SO much, cause I can't name myself a romantic person :)

I adore Milo/Kida pairing and I'm glad you've showed their love in such great way.

Man this story always cheers me up. One of the things that i hate most in the world is when a girl crys. Im just glad that everything works out in the end for Milo and Kida.

Damn yo this is a great story. Keep up the good work. You are a great writer.

The fluffiness of it all is like a giant pillow, I'm having to stop from falling asleep now that I've finished.

Really, really good.