Reviews for A Dawn of a New Change |
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Faery66 chapter 2 . 8/8 Hope to read more soon. D |
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28 Can you continue the story... Liked it hence its a pity when it ended |
musicluver246 chapter 2 . 5/21 Great story so far. |
laraferreira chapter 2 . 11/17/2019 loved it, continue! |
CheshireBloodFox chapter 2 . 11/15/2019 very good story so far, friend. However i would recommend changing the flash back and certain parts as the way they're written makes it look like you straight up stole them out of the various stories. the parts in question being when she gets all the non-magical currency funneled to her, from when she first sends a text to John and then saying its no longer her problem, when she first meets Loki/Gabriel, and when the Potters find they are no longer Potters |
andjelija.nenic chapter 2 . 11/10/2019 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
ClaireR89 chapter 1 . 9/28/2019 Has potential. Needs edited. I'm confused on how she was able to kick James and Lilly from the family. She's at best the heir. She doesn't have that kind of power in the family |
xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 2 . 8/14/2019 I love it! |
ThePhenoix11 chapter 1 . 8/11/2019 I'm not even going to read this from the summery you add in a crossover a at least 3 occs and a self incert Mary sue. |
Lionne.Fluffy chapter 1 . 8/4/2019 This chapter is fine, but maybe you should follow up on your other stories. |
Lionne.Fluffy chapter 2 . 7/29/2019 This chapter is great! I hope he will pay for what they did to Harry and Aaliyah! |
Dominus1389 chapter 2 . 7/26/2019 Hopefully its femslash :P |
hellfire45 chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 Good chapter and I can’t wait to see what happens next and who will be in the harem |
deathwearsblack chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 Like this story. |
Greer123 chapter 2 . 7/25/2019 I loved the use of the Supernatural crossover presented in this chapter. |