I loved the story but the ending was so sad just wondering can u do a Paz visla x cara dune story plz I

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WHY DOES ORDER 66 HAVE TO EXIST?!

Dam with that ending I was hoping he would beat order 66. Live happily ever after and all that

That was quite an...abrupt ending. Especially after they had their moment last chapter, I was expecting the bliss to last a bit longer. Nonetheless, this story was enjoyable to read and I'm happy to have commented on every chapter you posted. Sucks Bly and Aayla didnt have their happy ending but it's your story and I'm happy to have discovered and read it.

I wish things could be different. . .

Woohoo! They are now official. I love how Bly is able to read so much from just Aayla’s body language.

Ah, the unresolved tension has finally been resolved. Only thing now is how long can they keep this a secret from everyone else(?) And how much is this gonna affect their judgement on and off the battlefield(?) Can't wait to find out next chapter!

YES!

Yeah, I hate the Jedi. This attachment thing was their downfall. And I don't know why Kenobi is being such a hypocrite when he got with Satine and I swear Ki-Adi Mundi has like 5 wives or something so why wasn't did he never get reprimanded(?) I probably missed something about it, lol. Feels bad for Bly, I'm sure Aayla didn't mean it but I can't be sure.

I think our ship is about hit some rough seas. I’m also glad to know how much you appreciate my comments.

Ok let’s recap:

Chapter 10: probably my favorite so far. I’m am a sucker for a good cuddle. I find them so Intimate, even more than full blown mature scenes. It’s just like the pure essence of love some ones presence.

Chapter 11: Bly is straight up badass facing down grievous to protect her! Such a good story. I am enthralled.

Chapter 12: poor Bly waiting by her side the whole time. I hope they get the chance to actually talk through what is going on between them soon. It brightens my day whenever is see a new chapter for this in my alerts. Keep ‘em coming. You are amazing!

These two are just the definition of the subtlety(!) Would not be surprised if someone puts two and two together. I like the way you've progressed their relationship, from having an air of professionalism between them at the start, to forming a bond with another after what they've been through which I'm sure nearly every Jedi and their Clone did.

Ahhhh why do you keep hammering away at the feels?! Haha just kidding, these are fantastic! Although I don’t believe Grievous is force sensitive, and could there be a chapter 9A that shows Bly and Aayla getting a little closer before they’re sleeping next to each other? Seems like a tad bit of a jump, but that might just be me. Regardless, it’s excellent as always and I can’t wait to read part 12! Would you ever consider a longer, continuous story centered on Blyla? Hope so! Thanks for writing!

All gucci. I can imagine Bly doing something like this if Aayla was to get injured and to go against Greviois as well takes balls. But I suppose any clone would risk his life if it meant saving his General.

These two are just...so bloody adorable. I love the way you write them and their small but meaningful interactions they have with each other, whether conversation or physically.