This was really simple and sweet, and I don't really think I've read something where the two go to a concert (in a record store, no less). It's SO fitting. Nice work :)

You skillfully captured every feeling, every nuance. Yep, they are both on the same page, knowing that it is just a matter of time. Would you please consider continuing this? Thanks for writing for us!

I was so happy to see a new story by you! This was wonderful. I would love to see more but it’s also kind of perfect like this.

Beautiful! Just the right mix of awkwardness and excitement.

please continue with 'filling in' all the Lit moments cause you've a knack for making them all so believable and perfect.

UGH. I love it! So much tension, in all the best ways. Is there more, or is this a one-hour?

Good stuff. Cute and works so well. Lots of missed opportunities.