I don't usually review, but I feel like I have to. The first story was already mind-blowing, I simply couldn't stop reading. But this whole suspense around Sorin's death, and now this mysterious group? It's almost killing me, I love it. I absolutely love it. Keep up the amazing work!

Oh this was great, congrats on joining the military btw

Hey man how's it going?, believe me I fully understand your reasons for taking this long to update. I've just manged to update my story recently as well.

As for the chapter itself...well it reminded me why I loved your writing to begin with. Caleb still suffering from PTSD, Allison appearing and disappearing like a ghost and Maren...I got shivers when he was brought up again. The grudge between him and Caleb was legendary.

With kind regards. Sheath.

The man himself, back from eternal death.

Probably busy being the admin of the Hook Mafia kappa.

But the chapter was cool, though when Caleb said double the guard but the guard was only one person lmao.

Holy shit your not dead mate! I genuinely thought you had died during the Third 'I promise to keep an update schedule' War due to the fact you had 1) surrendered to the enemy faction side known as 'Writers Block' and gave up the story forever or 2) you actually did die in real life and obviously wouldn't be able to continue the story. Alas I'm glad it was only just the fact you had become a P.O.W of the Writers Block faction and managed to escape and continue this story which by the way welcome back and its awesome to see you continue this story.

P.S. Have a good day/night.

I love your fics I have been reading since the beginning. Especially with all the time I have on my hands guarding. As a soldier I can relate to certain characteristic of caleb. Good job

Love this story so far, it's definitely one of the best titanfall fanfics out there, keep up the good work :)

Interesting.
Cant quite guess what will happen, but thats a good thing. The dialogue is really good, although considering the rate of information sharing, you seem to be upping the speed of events. Or maybe you just want to set up a side-story?
The length is good, and if you can keep this up, I'm all for it. I have a couple stories to read, and the Expanse 8 is out in 3 days, so from my point of view, you can take your time.
I haven't seen any inconsistencies, but that may only be due to the fact that I am writing this a 1 in the morning.

Boy, I felt great reading this.
I mean, I have an idea of what you're trying to do, but it's still exciting nevertheless. The fights are golden, the dialogue is great, and the pacing is fast enough to keep me attached.
Really good job. Keep this up.

Pretty nice my dude, Apex predators lmao sounds pretty corny.

Hmm intresting start you got there, looks like an unknown party is responsible for these attacks. It will be awsome to see how this progresses. But I do think those two Marauder where quite stupid for hanging around a destroyed colony filled with dead and burned body's, as well as starting a fight with Caleb.

Caleb is still haunted with the past I see, I personally think Allison IS still alive and Caleb is going to go through hell to find her...the power of love can make you do some crazy sh*t.

I eagerly wait for more :)

Hmmm. This some good shit.

Love the story so far, but I have a question. Do you have the plot mapped out, and if you do, how long will this be?

Hey man, long time lurker, read your story long way back last year (your first one) also noticed you were a RWBY fan (RIP Arkos). Just keep on going dude. Doesn't really matter how long it takes. I can wait, we all can. Just do what you think is right.

Lmao, I remember how much I laughed when I found you on the CAFMOD Discord for arma. Anyways, nice chapter, certainly flows much better than my stories. Some nice character development going on. Not focusing on the MC too much, allowing the secondary characters to play some role. Very nice work.

Yeah you updated again with a good chapter, hope to see more updates a bit faster but I understand writers block and computer problems are a pain so just do your best, well till next time mate peace out and have a good day.