I like the Office reference. I’m sad to see this story cancelled, but if it’s getting improved, I guess the wait will be worth it. Best of luck, boyo.

FUCK YEAH! It's great to see this story returning! A lot of great dialogue in this chapter; I particularly liked Poppey's fluid innards. Welcome back to the land of the living, Teams MGTA and GRPE!

Oh, shit's kicking off now! Can't wait to see where this leads next. I liked the stupid pun about the arena's shape, I feel that somewhere out there, Barbara Dunkleman felt a disturbance in the force.

I feel like Gron's flashback in chapter 3 would have fit better here. But, then again, that would have made this chapter significantly longer.

Finally! Been waiting for this for a while. I like the idea of including Team CFVY. Coco is one of my favorite side characters. Also, I appreciate the fact that the teams are getting more mature with their language (I had a good, long laugh at Poppey's "shut the fu-"). Either way, another great chapter for a great story.

I see the subtle reference to Splinter Cell there, "then he's made the top ten." Clever. Also, in the previous chapter you made Team GRPE seem like they were sort of evil or morally gray, like the now take jobs to kill people or extort them, but here they are just a normal Huntsmen team. I assume that since they became mercs, they really don't care who they work for or what they do, so long as they get paid? And what was their "fall from grace"? You touched on it in the last chapter, and I'm super curious. Either way, great chapter, as always.

Are they gonna end up fighting the Grimm Dragon? Is that why you mentioned it in this chapter and made it the cover picture? BTW, great story so far.

I ship Azure and Gron

"She's always right" and feminism matches on. Good job guys

Isn't Qrow supposed to reference the scarecrow?

Im actually pretty curious to find out whta titians weapon is. all your other weapos have been really cool:)

Your writing is good but I don't think you need to list EVERY single reference in the author's notes.

It is good to finally see some-one adhere to Monty's color naming rule. I look forward to seeing more of this story in the future.