Reviews for Welcomed Second Chance
Abdur Rauf Aymaan chapter 3 . 6/15
very rare to find a fellow Bangladeshi on fanfiction
stefanus313 chapter 9 . 6/6
to be honest I was not expecting this novel to be that good, but you proved me wrong so thank you for that I'm looking forward for your next releases
Hamburgboi chapter 4 . 5/31
Shape Shifter...there was a smut regarding this topic and I have to say, you're a creative bastard.
Shaedy.Mo chapter 9 . 5/30
Even though I was raised in a Muslim household, I still find myself getting a little curious about how people from different cultures would apply Islam into their daily lives. And to say that this chapter hasn't been somewhat enlightening about Islam in Bangladesh would be quite the understatement.
Kratos chapter 3 . 5/24
Yeah, this part...

"They accepted that I have taken their son's place, asked me to make the name of their son famous and gave me a long life in my second chance."

... is nothing but pure BS.

No parents will EVER just accept that their child's soul has been fucking replaced by some random rando out of nowhere willy nilly, what the fuck is this bullshit?

I wonder how YOU would feel if someone jumped into your own body, kicked your soul out and your parents will be like 'No worries bro, we got you" and basically not giving single F about you.

Their child is basically dead and his chance of leaving his life has been snatched away by someone else, they don't even know if he's dead or not, whether his soul went into the after-life or not.

A better way of doing this would be if the SI's soul merged with Naruto's own, instead of just replacing it entirely, at least that way you won't have to display your catastrophic writing skills when it comes to familial relationships.
Svenion chapter 17 . 5/25
interesting so far, but most of this feels like random musings and inconsequential ramblings. will events pick up once he's at university? any time skip/training montages coming up? your writing is good, it's the pace that feels clumsy.
iamjmph01 chapter 1 . 5/25
well, its a good idea. I'm going to move forward. I hope in future chapters you found someone to help with the grammar. This was hard to read because i was having to correct things as i went. Thanks for writing and sharing.
Svenion chapter 11 . 5/24
hopefully this is the last of the references to his old life. enjoying the Naruto portion of the story.
ForestShadeau chapter 17 . 5/24
Thanks for the hard work love the story _
Rodvek97 chapter 17 . 5/24
Good Chapter :D
Rodvek97 chapter 13 . 5/24
Good Chapter :D
Rodvek97 chapter 12 . 5/24
Good Chapter :D
Harlurephne chapter 3 . 5/24
Bhai. Bohudin por ek Jon bangali writer pailam. Ager Jon khali half half like chere dito. Please don't do that.
setokayba2n chapter 17 . 5/24
Too bad he can't just go and ask Kabuto to share his investigations
Rodvek97 chapter 11 . 5/24
Good Chapter :D
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