Reviews for Try Again |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is lovely, really like the angst turned happy ending. Thank you for writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it... great way to celebrate being back together... twins! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was cute! Thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow that was a nice story. I rather enjoyed it very much. I love how you drew me into the story. Its so good when a writer can make somebody feel so much and with a short story. I am very glad I came across this gem. Thank you for sharing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it would like to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Muggle mind healer" "Barbed missile as a piece of Candy" Fantastic lines This is actually one of my favourite one shots that I have ever read for this pairing. Very nicely done |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this, just wish that there was more of it! ;o) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously wonderful story and great ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my god that was really painful and so well written ! I hope Hermione explained to Draco how much she felt betrayed that he didn't trust her, but I think she did in the counseling. I know from experience how it feels when friends and family try to separate couples. It's very difficult to resist and it brings tension in the couple, that's normal that they seperated and they needed it to understand what they wanted from eacch other, now they are stronger and won't make the same mistakes. My husband and I lost lots of friends and had a BIG fight with his mother but in the end, we got back together because that's what we wanted, screw what others think ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It would of been to of continued, what happened to his parents, sis they stay together, dos his mum come and visit? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm, it’s a lovely fic but I think Hermione forgave Draco too quickly. Yes, it’s his father, but he literally didn’t believe Hermione when she explained what Lucius told her? That’s a glaring lack of trust, the kind of trust that should not be forgiven just because he found out the truth from Lucius’ mouth and a third other party. Also, them having twins when they’re still working on their couple issues is not a HEA, they’ll be too busy with the babies to work on their relationship and the many trust issues :s But I guess we can suspend disbelief because it’s a cute Dramione. |
![]() ![]() Very nice story, Lucious is a bastard, glad they got together again. Very good one shot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful story |
![]() ![]() This piece was very well done, I wish we could see a bit more of them piecing back their marriage, but as it stands it was great. |
![]() ![]() Great fic. I loved it. |