Reviews for I guess I'll give it a shot
LeBomb chapter 8 . 6/12
make a shadow clone and use it for some mild PTSD therapy. you can tell it everything.
LeBomb chapter 8 . 6/12
green tea and matches is better than coffee caffeine. but I do enjoy both
LeBomb chapter 7 . 6/12
I forgot. ofc his sensei is kushina. cliche ass story. just keep writing though and be more unique.
Sam est classe chapter 8 . 6/8
Thank you for the chapter
Guest chapter 7 . 6/5
That...was extremely convoluted. I can buy the whole, "she has a regeneration factor AND the mokuton" because fine, you have one then you can have the other and she IS a Senju. But she also just happens to know how to hide her chakra? Really? And she has never displayed this ability ever, even to her sensor teammate? Hell even the Protagonist is shocked because only High level Chunin or Jounin are usually capable of that. And then even discounting that bullshit, she had the fortitude and chakra to save her teammate at JUST the right time and JUST the right place? Also apparently she kept her chakra hidden even when using Mokuton to save her teammate from the canyon. Read that again. She, a fucking GENIN kept her chakra hidden, a skill explicitly stated to be Chunin/Jounin exclusive because of difficulty, and she continued to keep it hidden even as she performed an on the spot Mokuton jutsu. Not to mention the Protagonist could sense his male teammate even when his teammate was unconscious, so how did he not sense him being saved from the fucking canyon. There is just too much convenient shit going on and you just skip over it like it isn't bullshit. The whole mission going to shit was a good plot point as it really shoves you into the shinobi world. It was a little strange that a basic ass HENGE was enough to fool Kushina or that a head Jounin didn't take off your protagonist's head but it was a pretty good story for a self insert. This kind of narrative convenience just completely pulled me out of any sense of danger or threat because now I know everyone is going to live happily ever after.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/5
Kinda trippy that an academy basic can fool a jounin, especially a henge performed whilst injured and being constantly pergormed on with medical equipment. I'm pretty sure henge dispels with touch, so how did that happen?
sarahgri99 chapter 8 . 6/7
I loved the chapter! Takezo kicked ass!
Vallavarayan chapter 2 . 6/6
I expected him to approach Daito gai to ask for help with his taijutsu and learn the gates.
DG2 chapter 8 . 6/5
There is a too much drama so far. The MC either needs to take events into his own hands or something. Right now it is like he's being jerked around by the whims of others.
DG2 chapter 6 . 6/5
Can't believe you didn't kill anyone. Lame
SpiralBaka chapter 3 . 6/5
I'm at the beginning of chapter 3. and I'm very confused. hisa and kayame. are both of them men? or is one of them a woman? if so, which one is a woman? it's not very clear in this chapter. it feels like you are using "he" and "she" interchangeably.
Oigresz chapter 8 . 6/5
Está muy buena la historia me está encanta
Jacksonion Democracy chapter 8 . 6/4
Good stuff, I'm happy to see the update after so long and I'm excited for more. TY 4 the chapter!
Burning Moonlight chapter 7 . 6/4
For your yell/whispered, try hissed? Or murmured?
ALEX99999 chapter 8 . 6/4
Didn't he take a break a little too long? I mean, those wounds in our world would probably need more time, but in Naruto's world...
The interaction with his family was very good. You created a good OC, Hisa is a charismatic character, I like even more the fact that he can enter into a romantic relationship with the MC.
Itachi already had enough chakra to make a shadow clone at the age of 5, you said that the MC had a lot of chakra, even more than Hisa, who is half Senju and half Uzumaki, the MC should be able to make a dozen clones without effort.
Well, it took a while, but it was worth the wait. I thank you for this chapter and I hope you can publish it soon.
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