i would kill his father and the shop keeper send them to hell

Ichigo Is Also part quincy

Awesome job

Can’t wait for more

What a wonderful story! Love how you made the Kurosaki Sisters have more of a main role in the story. This will be one fantastic story in the making and I can't wait for your next chapter.

Love the concept of the story and how it includes all the Kurosaki's. The fact that secrets aren't being kept quite as much as in canon is awesome to see. It'll be interesting to see how the latter arcs go down as well as see if Ichigo and Rukia get any closer.

ishine you prick instead of doing that where the fuck wAS YOU HUMPING YOUR BOYFRIEND HAT AND CLOGS AH BATTYBOY BLOODCLART

Gah! This is so good!

Thank you so much for the update. I love this fic hope you continue

Hi..please dont do te whole Ywach being Zangetsu rather let Zangetsu take his true role as A Zanpakto or give ichigo the Duel blades early trow a spanner in the work of and Shinigami/Quincy Zangetsu. Two blades that are hybrids of Hallow/soul reaper-Quincy/Soulreaper Both with different release phrase like stop thhe rain for thhe old man n peirce the heavens asunder zangetsu

I'm very much enjoying this. Looking forward to what's next, and to he eventual revelation the Isshin is in on the plot to turn Rukia into a human.

I don't think I've seen anything quite like this before. Intriguing. Figuring out how the new context should change Ichigo's thoughts and actions seems like it will be a challenge.

Followed. I think it's partly because of the debacle of 686 that people still read Bleach fanfiction.

How does Karin know what her brother's doing? Does she have mental powers or something? XD

Does Yuzu... wish she could see their mother's ghost?... Maybe?

I love the meeting with Ryuuken! I was surprised in the manga that they hadn't grown closer much.

I really like how you describe Rukia's spiritual presence, like if it was muffled

You go for the anime version then rather. In which I still don't understand why they reversed the places of Karin and Yuzu in the hollow scene... but no matter, really. Or rather, you managed to make something awesome out of it. Karin fighting the Hollow! I love this n_n

OMG there are just too many awesome things you added in there. It's such a relief to know that there are people out there that can re-write a part of the story and make it this interesting T_T

Hahah I had forgotten Ichigo used a ladder to attack it in the anime. In the manga he uses a bat (a ladder's way more effective, mind you - but I don't think it the Hollow cared about the difference n_n;)

Huh. I happen not to know what 'oyaji' means. Could you enlighten me?

"I own a candy shop, and have come to offer my services" "Dammit we don't need candy right now!" Hahah just as clear as ever, Uarahara-san, ne?

Yes, LOTS of people read Bleach fics. At least I know quite a lot of them.

I've only read the first chapter until now, so I haven't checked the A/N on the other ones, but if you're STILL looking for a proof-reader then I'm willing to do it, if you want, though sending the chapters by email may be more practical.

I will agree the unanswered questions of the final does somewhat annoy me. But I still accept it as an Ichigo and Orihime pairing fan.

The idea of Ichigo's family having more involvement in the story is an idea I like, but after what said in the author's notes I have reservations.

So, I'm just going to ask here and hope for a reply to clarify via a PM. Is this story eventually going to be an Ichigo and Rukia pairing story?