Reviews for Wormling |
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SeanHicks4 chapter 5 . 8/22 Darker than I expected, but still an interesting read. |
Little Liar chapter 5 . 11/16/2019 It could be better. |
Guest chapter 5 . 7/23/2019 A painful cliffhanger, just when it starts to have something resembling a plot, the story is left abandoned. |
Typo chapter 3 . 7/23/2019 Chose not - chose to |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2019 Having Dallons twins is another nonsensical change that serve no purpose . |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/23/2019 A but silly to change the undersiders that much and to give them such pretentious names. Feels like a change for the sake of making changes rather than something that actually matters. |
Dedischado chapter 5 . 5/11/2019 Please don’t let this one die, the concept is fascinating |
Guest chapter 5 . 5/9/2019 I guess she has Labyrinth's shard or something? Interesting, but you are sacrificing too much narrative clarity in an attempt to be 'artsy'. |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/9/2019 typo to thing - to think |
itsMARWIE chapter 5 . 1/21/2019 Awww. Moar? |
I'm.Only.Here.To.ReadReview chapter 5 . 1/18/2019 I can barely understand what's happening half the time but damn, do I love reading this! |
Eric Jtunn chapter 5 . 1/15/2019 Promising story, keep writing! Your style for the story is interesting if a tad confusing but definitely worth some expanding. Can't wait to see her meet Zion or Mark. Watched. |
osterreicher97 chapter 5 . 1/5/2019 Wow, so Taylor is basically a mini Entity. Lol, I would really like to see more of the external views on her actions, and I wonder how Cauldron will react to what is basically a mini entity that can't feel anything at all. |
Arbalestyear chapter 5 . 12/31/2018 The interlude was too short to satisfy me I don't care about Taylor's clarity, but where is MY clarity? also there are a few minor spelling mistakes here and there so it might be a good idea to try and get a beta Apart from that it looks pretty good. |
TTGG03 chapter 5 . 12/22/2018 What is going on? |