Reviews for Red Dragon of Lightning |
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PrimeEmperor chapter 4 . 7/19 hope they will not become Grimory slave |
PrimeEmperor chapter 3 . 7/19 i hope not tragedy scene later! |
sueperben chapter 25 . 2/4 good chapter |
ralphwillis26 chapter 25 . 10/31/2019 please update |
Legalt chapter 9 . 10/23/2019 it always amazes me how it can only take 1 or 2 chapters to totally ruin a story for me. I write as well so I don't like being negative to other writers, but COME ON! Doing that to Akeno for the sake of making her join Rias and having EXACTLY the same problems as canon? Then actually turning Issei into a pervert like canon? After all the growth and seriousness he's done? Stuff that should've made and kept him a bit more serious and in control like canon Vali? And when the pairing is also just like two women? I loved the interaction between the three and just because you took the easy route with Akeno joining Rias without staying original like you have been, and then RANDOMLY changing Issei who clearly anyone who's been reading until now likes how he is, makes me feel like I read everything for nothing after this. Anyway, criticism or rant /over. Thanks for the previous chapters as it was fun while it lasted. |
ralphwillis26 chapter 1 . 9/15/2019 please update I want to see what happens when you get done |
Dark dragon of o chapter 25 . 8/23/2019 Plzzz...update soon...xd |
The Infinite Dragon God chapter 25 . 3/29/2019 I wonder what would have happened if Vali let Albion finish that sentence? Oh well |
tom80 chapter 8 . 3/7/2019 Akeno's personality will be quite the opposite of the known... |
OechsnerC chapter 25 . 2/18/2019 Awesome update |
merendinoemiliano chapter 25 . 2/18/2019 Quite nice chapter and training, poor Vali, having to endure Kuroka, but i hope for longer fights in the future and same requestion about a small harem(five girls at most, sorry if i'm annoying on it). Keep up the good work and see you soon. |
darth56 chapter 24 . 1/26/2019 love this story he has power and not an out right pervert that is you are doing a great job of story telling thanks and i hope for more chapters again thanks |
OechsnerC chapter 24 . 1/25/2019 Awesome update. |
merendinoemiliano chapter 24 . 1/25/2019 Sweet chapter, can't wait for more. Sorry the briefness, i'm in exam period. |
Tsuki-no-Hazama Hime chapter 24 . 1/24/2019 you know I was going to ask that, but I know our bane and I don't want to bother you with that, anyway I'm using FF App on mobile now if you have them and have some free time, let's have some fun brainstorming ideas together |