Reviews for Harry Potter, Shadow Thief
jh831 chapter 7 . 11/3/2019
I could go sarcastic for this update but i wont.
Longer chapters would be apreciated.
7 chapters and 4,808 words, and over a year old. Just saying, could you make chapters at least 2,000 words or more?
AstroNeko3000 chapter 1 . 9/22/2018
are you ever going to update?
ChocolateSauce18 chapter 3 . 8/12/2018
Your story has a lot of potential however chapters need to be longer. This is an absolute must because I find myself very unsatisfied with what I'm reading. D

The whole story seems to be rushed and choppy. The first scene on the first chapter was totally unnecessary.

You need to write more details. I want more information than I what I'm given.

With that being said, I wish you good luck!
MerlinTheArchmage chapter 3 . 8/11/2018
Again, good so far, few grammar mistakes here and there but keep it up !
Dalar Rose chapter 3 . 8/11/2018
Interesting. Not at all what I thought it would be from the description/summary. Brilliant. Love it.
RebeliousOne chapter 3 . 8/11/2018
Did Harry skip Hogwarts or is he on break?
RebeliousOne chapter 2 . 8/11/2018
It sounds like a match made in hell bonding over their crimes. lol
RebeliousOne chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
This has so much potential. :)
Musik Drache chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
Well, you have a very interesting premise. The first scene where the baby is dropped off is rather choppy and honestly unnecessary. Most people reading the story already know how Harry arrived so unless something different takes place that night, it isn’t needed. Harry seems rather godly with his abilities. We are assuming he is only 10 and he can already transport anywhere in the world, steal, pickpocket, has a well known underground name, has managed to avoid being known by the authorities, met Dumbledore and remembers it, and on top of that a little snippet that he loves country music, plays guitar, and has long hair. Maybe a little more fleshing to the story and a little more...realism? Magic can do amazing things and ultimately it’s your story so please take this as constructive criticism.
MerlinTheArchmage chapter 1 . 8/11/2018
Good story so far keep it up