LOVE IT!

Like I'm happy with the ending but I also feel like it was too short of an ending

Oh the pain she had to be in and wonder what the guild will do now

at least you finish it
thank you for make this story

It's a great story! Please complete it! Looking forward to an update

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

No Lucy you can’t die

Overall, I'm really enjoying this story! I watch the dubbed version of Fairy Tail, and I can't help but picture those voice actors speaking the lines in your story. A lot of this dialogue is not only in character, but it's written authentically like Mashima wrote it, or the boys at Funnimation.

Also, the villainess's magic that controls air is very fascinating! It reminds me somewhat of "blood bending" in Avatar, and it also sounds like it would make a really cool quirk in the My Hero Acadamia series, but your display of it as a magic type very well done!

I can't wait until the next chapter is out, and I hope you continue to write more stories after it's complete! :D

why you leave like this
i like how they reunion
pls update soon

The next chapter will be the last? Feels like there’s a lot left to happen.

Nooooooo! Poor Lucy! Poor Natsu! I hope they'll all be okay! Thanks for the new chapters!

You ended it right when it got to the good part

Great story! Can't wait for the next update!

So is this post-manga or pre. If it is post Lucy would be aware of that Lumen Histoire/Fairy Heart would have been Mavis's body, not that she would still tell them but she would know.

love this fanfic