Reviews for The Blossom, The Serpent, and a Paper Moon
Redrangerlegacy chapter 3 . 12/10/2018
Out of curiosity, is Shirou’s weapon form Caliburn?
UzumakiSora chapter 3 . 10/15/2018
Aw man awesome can’t wait for the story to rev up
King of fans chapter 3 . 10/10/2018
Good chapter

I can tell you had fun righting Excalibur.

Why dose it not serprise me that shirou is saber's weapon. With I am the boon of my sword.

So saber is sticking with calibern or her spear.

Why did I have the filling Arther asked Merlin to cast a spell to keep Excalibur quite or looked in sword form.

Lastly I can only think of two fate charters that could handle Excalibur, Sakura saber, and Oda. Oda has personality and her own annoyingness might counteract Excaliber. Add in her ego and fourth wall breaking she has the tools to survive.
Sakura saber's is because she hangs out with Oda all day, and do to her weak health/blood loss she might pass out during the middle of Excaliber's songs and story's and not have to lessen to all of it.
NomadicNine chapter 3 . 9/30/2018
Hmm... I'm more certain that Shirou is usually in a Caliburn form. And are Shirou and Archer siblings? Cause if they are, I put a vote that Archer be called Kuro. And if that's true, wouldn't that mean there's technically two Copy-Weapons in the Academy now?
Anon chapter 3 . 9/30/2018
The irony of Shirou being Artoria's weapon is not lost.

Actually, kinda chuckle-inducing, thinking about it.
King of Fans chapter 2 . 9/5/2018
Good chapter and glad to see you are continuing with your story.

Why dose it not surprise me that Rin is in the top 3 academically.

Why do I have the feeling Gilgamesh and Archer were thinking about stabbing someone, but we're only stopped by something.

I bet cursed arm Hassan is probly glad that the DWMA did not send younger students, otherwise he will have to deal with King Hassan. The Hassan that can mimic Death its self and no one will notic. There both extremely strong, and have the same views about kids.

Good idea introducing Gilgamesh, and Enkidu in there home land.

Lastly nice chose with makeing Enkidu Gilgamesh's partner. You can probably count the people that Gilgamesh can closely work with one on one, on One hand. Hack Enkidu is probably the only person in fiction that I can see performing soul precedents with Gilgamesh.
VGBlackwing chapter 2 . 9/5/2018
really confuse with this is Rider aka medusa a summon servant and not the witch medusa cause to be honest it too fucking confusing
Guest chapter 2 . 9/4/2018
Why do I have the feeling that Kirei is either the school nurse or the guidance counselor.
NomadicNine chapter 2 . 9/3/2018
Oh my, I wonder if Shirou and Archer are Meister/Weapon hybrids like Maka. That'd be interesting.
EternalKing chapter 1 . 8/12/2018
It'd be interesting to see Shirou and EMIYA as brothers who hate each other haha. I guess if you keep up the trend Shirou will be wielding Saber in the form of Excalibur, Caliburn, or rhongominiad. Rin will likely just wield Kanshou/Bakuya with some other weapons thrown in. I'm curious if Shinji will show up, he may have been a dick on SN but in HA as well as the fate materials he's shown to be a good friend if Albeit tsuntsun
King of Fans chapter 1 . 8/6/2018
Good chapter.

It is definitely a interesting idea of haveing masters of fate being mister and there weapons being the servants

The Addison of others fate charters into the same style is interesting and something I look forward to seeing how you implement the others into it especially if you're doing just the fate stay night or the other works too.
Although they are 4 elephants in the room that needs to be addressed with this style.
1.) Archer and shirou- those to are literally the same person, one being a master and the other a servant, and there ability to copy any weapon can be Little hard to explain. The best idea I can for the archer weapon scenario is that she can copy the form of any weapon he sees, but try to show that any one they copy is a clear down gread in quality and skill, but wins fights through sheer flexibility and adaptability.
2.)caster- she has beast bottle logic of the story both the magic power of a witch, the power to tern into a weapon, and Misters powers. Not to mention assasionashion is such a threat to his skill. So in other words I look forward to see that you do with them.
3.)Gilgamesh- Gil's main fighting style is to over wellm his enamy with weapons. Considering the fact weapons can only take up one form and be at one place at a time that manse he would mostly like have to be a mister with A Ridonculous number of weapons. However, do his personality I don't see anyone for me a good partnership with him except maybe Enkidu, hakuno, or that psycho Saint.
4.)Saber- she is literally king Arthur and uses excalibur. However, considering Excalibar already exist and his personality, that only leaves three options.
One saber can take a similar form to Excalibur in the form of calibern, Excalibers weaker precursor. Two she can take the form of Avalon Exexcalcalib excalibur's scabbard than can be used to heal injuries and silence the holy sword for time. Last Saber could simply be Excalibur's partner; the idea of saber tolerating the sword for her dreams, or the king of Knights actually enjoying excalibur antics to be very amusing.

Lastly props to you with your choice if main characters. I really love Sakura and riders interactions. However, any story that I found that has them as probably characters are extremely rare. With The vast majority of those just haveing them as a member of shirou's Harem.
So let's give you a round of a applause for a story with two characters with great chemistry together as the stars and with unbelievable originality to boot in the chose of main characters.
NomadicNine chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
Hmm... Would Shirou still keep his magecraft and RM? Since... Shirou could classify as a Multi-Weapon at this point.
Midnight49 chapter 1 . 8/3/2018
Servants becoming weapons while Masters are the meisters? I am intrigued... but wait what about the other masters and Servants? Will they appear to? And if they do would Archer be Rin’s partner and how would that work? Will he be like an artificial copy of Shirou but, then something went wrong and he aged up and has a more realistic and jaded view of the world? Well I know I can’t wait for chapter 2