Love this! Can't wait to read more!

I love this! Please continue writing!

Good Stuff!

I loved it make more, the way you describe action scenes are just amazing.

This was actually pretty entertaining. I loved how you described the fight scene. It was brilliant. The ending was just too cute. You did a really good job with this. I'd like to see more of your work on here.

Really hope there’s more of Octopath. Keep up the good work.

Despite a few spelling errors here and there, it was a really cute story. I really enjoyed it, keep up the good work.