please update this story. it's getting more interesting and what kind of reaction would ontari do when she see her wife hurt by the same man.

Please update this story, it's really good and you don't see oc/ontari stories often

Well, Diana is a terrible human being. Pike was a monster but his attacks against Azgeda were far more justified than what Echo did. He deserve to die but so does Echo and a lot of people, and many inside the mountain were innocent. I hope Azgeda is punished and Diana too, the way she act she is barely above a rabid animal.

Did the main character's name change?

MORE! pls

Burns, gives that whole fire and ice combo - both burn. And I don't care which one is first as long as Pike dies slowly...

Burns, pike

You go girl keep writing! -BSP

Oh no they killed jaha what a shame oh well truly a shame yesthe only reason I liked him was because of his son who was a nice guy)

Found Clarke's sister story, yes! (No indication to it in summary :( Awesome start, will definitely follow along for the ride. And the pairing, Ontari! So exited!

Hey just read your new story sounds like a good beginning story line.

I can’t wait to find what happens next... you are doing an awesome job