Sorry, but I hate how wrote SI Naruto supporting Sakura. Her behavior is just nasty. I will stop reading it right here.

great ff i hope the ff will be continued in the future.

This pisses me off, I hate the mc especially after his first thought was to kill people, not to mention hes a fucking close pedophile. I hate whiny ass si because if you watched naruto your first thought would to fucking train or else you'll die, also tired of sis complaining about shit like it's not my body (yes it is) and I have to find a way home

Please don't give up, this is quite big cliffhanger you left for us and we really need closure

Ok. Your a bit too angsty for my taste. Good luck.

Wooooooow, I really didn't expect him to suddenly pull the "We're actually both working for Orochimaru." card. That seriously caught me by surprise, that's seriously devious and underhanded, a beautifully shinobi thing to do! Truly, his hip and cool ways will undoubtedly awe and astound his opponents!
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Channelling Gai's mannerisms is hard, yo.

I have patience. Whenever you have the time or inclination to write. I hope you do. Because damnit you ended on a sadistic cliffy! Pretty sure this isn’t regular survival training these students are doing, even if it seems like something Anko would do. Which, really liking her as a teacher better than Iruka even if I like Iruka.

Also loving the addition of Kurama’s random comments. Rooting for that guy’s freedom but not too hopeful it can ever happen. But who knows?

Have a lovely month. Hope all is going well for you irl.

Thank you for writing, by the way.

Arashi’s accidental journalism is both hilarious and appealing. Would totally read The Leaf’s Shadow magazine if it existed.

He should have just admitted the real truth, I don’t think Kurama would have given a shit either way.

I'm sorry things aren't so great for you right now, but if it's any consolation I'm very invested in this story. I love how you write, and I love your character. :) I look forward to more

That bit at the end there was the only hilarious blip of sunshine in this so far pessimistic (but great) work

Fantastic Story! Hope you are doing okay.

Time for a review. Or, more like, a rant. Whatever.

Alright, I've had enough of this bullshit. A bit of drama in an 'Adventure' story is fine. Too much and it becomes fucking annoying. If I wanted to read drama/angst then I would've gone for stories with a 'Drama' or 'Angst' tag. This story is supposed to be about ADVENTURE for fuck's sake.

The SI's mental capacity- or, in this case, a lack of- is just too ridiculous for me to be able to continue reading. 'Oh noes, I'm just a fabrication! Blah. Blah. Blah.' Really? Do you even know for certain that your 'previous life' wasn't just a dream or illussion? And, so what if what think is true? What can you even do about it? Ugh. Fucking get over it already.

And then there's the talk with Kurama. There's just too much I have to say about it but no longer have the time to waste to write everything down.

I'm out.

change the naruto picture!

What? No, the clone interactions are great. Keep it up