Just throwing this out there in case someone might want to pick it up and run with it: an interesting story line would be Max falling for the snake lady’s sister’s widow. I would love to write more fan fic myself but am suffering from both writers and artist block!

Definitely an interesting twist to the end of this story. I agree, it is a cliffhanger! I never would have guessed that Solomon was Max’s dad and now it sounds like Max is taking his place in the cult! Mind blown!
I am a little confused though, was Kim impregnated by Kenny or John Littleton? Oh the dirty little secrets that are kept behind the picket fences in Rome, WI!
I can’t wait for another story to be written. As I’ve said before, if the show after season 3 had writers like you, maybe it would have survived longer than it did! Keep up the good work and I’ll be anxious to see what lies ahead!

Wow! Just wow! I can’t wait to see what happens. This Solomon guy -whew where do I begin? Please update soon

I missed something. When did Kenny get shot and leave the hospital? Is this a reference to an earlier fan fic or did I miss something?

I don’t even know where to begin with this chapter. Wow just wow. So much going on and I get that it’s a fanfic but it’s so OOC and hard for me to believe. Max would never set Kenny up no matter how mad she is at him. On the other hand I want to know where Kenny even went and how everything transpired after his hospital bolt. Question though? Where is Wambaugh during all of this? We all know he always had his nose in everyone’s business so unless he’s dead it’s unlikely he isn’t around during all of this.

Please update soon!

Max is going to cave and sleep with Ken y and ruin her relationship with John right when they rescue Kim. DRAMA!

Ooh, I love Kenny drunkly telling Max that he loves her and her being so committed to John and their family.. She was so lovely with Kara in this too. Max/Kenny need to just boink and deal with the fallout.

Poor Kim...and John when they do

Oh boy! Things in Rome, WI are starting to heat up! I can’t wait to read how Jimmy and Jill are going to react to the fact Kim is pregnant! Please update soon!

Can't say I didn't see Kim being pregnant coming. Hopefully they find her before the baby is born however. That baby deserves better than crazy cult vibes raising it...Love the confession from Kenny. They need to have a random affair to just get it out of their systems then let $#! hit the fan with the drama between everyone when they find out. Drama makes for great stories. Can't wait for the next update.

Totally on a roll here-I hope you decide to make this longer than 6 chapters! Please update soon!

Oh, I feel like Kenny and Max are going to have an affair in the middle of this and torpedo everything!

Poor Kim! I need more! Love the romance mixed with Kims horror! Can’t want for a Max/John baby

I love John and Max in this! They are so sweet and grown up and I love how he just hugs her and tells her to be hormonal. Kim is heartbreaking!

Ohhhh! I need answers! How do Jimmy & Jill process this info? How does Max comfort him now that she's figured it out? Will they ever even find Kim and her potential babies? Who is this creep-azoid who keeps kidnapping girls and enslaving them?