Love this chapter, and story. The romantic confusion and struggle, I just can’t wait to seee where this goes.

I wish you nothing but the best of luck

I looove this

this gay

I believe this to be well written and good structure. I really can’t give you much because is short, which their is nothing wrong, but it is a good opener in my opinion. Can’t wait to see where this goes.

This honestly is a great story, and in my opinion, which honestly isn’t much, you are a great writer. Although don’t think you have to pressure yourself with quick updates, take your time and enjoy writing.